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Trap Side B: Halo
🕑 Added 2017-07-31 03:04:41 +0000 UTC I feel I need to delve into more full body shots or something because this one was actually annoying for no weight-bearing reason other than that i haven't familiarized myself with certain shots likewise. this was a stiff and simple shot as well so its a sure sign to work on it. Embarrassing to admit honestly but it's the truth. Well annoying at least in the refinement sketch process since there were no real problems that i can think of accord to the rendering portion. I also feel i need to practice more bare/exposed abdominal/torso shots of the slender kind since it feels wrong in the sense of length (i presume?) and shape.outside of the self critique, what i do like and enjoy is the attire change from the WIP! Simple was the goal to contrast "Side A" with the decor and stitching, however I felt the WIP attire of "Side B" was weak and stale and blended too much with the background color palette. usually that wouldn't be a problem in my opinion to blend with the background color palette but i felt there was a disconnect of consistency when in juxtapose with Side A and how it made them more reciprocal? like seperated, not blended, but whole. hope that makes sense honestly since i can't really quite describe what i mean. Anyway, i basically just made minor detail and color changes but nothing too weighty. hope you guys like!
