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Ruby's Workout Page 17
🕑 Added 2017-04-03 05:38:23 +0000 UTC page 17 done! ok so it's been some time since i revisited this so i actually had to look at the last pages to see what i can get away with and what i needed to retain. what i mean by this is that seeing the overall comic, i've constantly mentioned this before that i hate the lack of color that i wasn't able to provide honestly so in the last 2 pages it seems i tried to get away with it by providing overlay layers to accentuate some reds and shadows. looking at it now in retrospect, it works as it's own but doesn't seem to be interesting as an "all together" kind of thing. so instead, i tried to lighten up the overlay saturations with ambient colors and trying to color more of the texts insetad as you can see with some of the SFX.of course it's not a huge game changer or anything but i thought it'd be at least something different to look at once in a while x) afraid personally that there would be inconsistencies with this from the other pages but then again there's been a whole style change throughout the entire comic so the minimal changes don't seem overbearing to mew now. also i've tried to give her shirt a bit of transparency from all the sweat she's been building up! kind of weird of how it clashes with the red text since red doesn't really become transparent obviously so i don't know how to feel about it at the moment but maybe it'll look better once i try it out some more c: one more thing, took your guys feedback/critique on the anal tug and made it a tad bit shorter and more forgiving on the rim part of it! hope it's a bit better, i did what i could for it ^^ anyway, hope you like this page! will start working on the next page asap as well as alternating on solo pieces i'd like to personally work on
