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Ruby's Workout Page 26 WIP 2
🕑 Added 2017-12-06 12:59:27 +0000 UTC All characters presented in this image are fictional, 18 years and older, and the acts depicted in this image are consensual to the individuals involved.Apologies on the pace of this page, finals really consumed a lot of my time but hopefully you guys like the structural changes Ive made to this page! I combined the top 2 panels into a singular shot since I felt i didnt have enough full body xray shots, or at least for DP that is. The more significant changes though are the last 2 panels. The subject of the last 2 originally wasnt so much of a problem but I didnt like that the shots werent interesting per se. for the first of the 2, i thought a nice legato esque torque would be a nice shot that compliments something a little more angular and zig zaggy with the next panel.
One final thing is that I want to emphasize more motion lines in the final product. I wont shut up about it I know but energy always gets lost through the rendering process and since I dont use thick or noticeable outlines in my work, I find it a bit difficult to retain that translation as well. Ive always been afraid of adding more where its necessary because I feel I may ruin it if I do too much, however I will try experimenting with creating harsher and more noticeable motion in the rendering and hopefully it turns out well. thats all to say for this page, hope you like!
