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v2c72.2 Metal and Glass Part 2

🕑 Added 2021-10-16 01:05:14 +0000 UTC

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Mickey Phoenix

But I hope to heck he omitted tobacco. That stuff is *nasty*!

Mickey Phoenix

I'm not just thinking of getting high. I'm thinking that cocaine, opium, and marijuana all have significant medical uses, and that rubber is incredibly useful (especially if he remembers that latex plus sulfur plus heat equals vulcanized rubber).

Mickey Phoenix

To be entirely honest, I'm curious whether the plants he drew included coca (source of cocaine), poppies (source of opium), rubber trees (source of latex rubber) and cannabis (aka marijuana).

Kara Nina

Nah, Big D has to solve the formation riddle first. Maybe she could take a combat Bunny along. They would probably both enjoy that.

Gremlin Jack

Mate, given the prices those commodities commanded in the age of sail, coffee and chocolate ARE treasures.

Carl Mason

Is he actually after coca or is he after cacao? Because he should know better than to get mixed up in drugs.

Lazerus56

An expedition, not for ancient treasure or cultivation boons--but for freaking chocolate and coffee is incredible. Hell hire her and have her lead Jin's new trade empire hahaah. No seriously tho you could send Big D on this epic quest haha.

Midjji

Noo its way funnier if she brings him coca and he does not realize his mistake untill he speeds up all of the children of the village ^^

John Pratt

Silk and poppies I'd bet they already have.

Zeta

or maybe coca cola. who knows :D

Dion

I’ll be happy if we get just weed lol

Lochar

I'm almost curious what cultivator qi grown cocaine would do to someone here.

Alan McBrayer

Seriously, the last time one of the disciples got a stimulate in them Washy swam so far he made it to a mystical grotto overseen by a grumpy old turtle.

Alexis Lionel

First you get the coca, then you get the cocaine. Then you get the power, and the power gets you the women.

Ricardo Torres Guzman

I think you ment cocoa not Coca tree

Devin Jones

My wife once made vanilla from vanilla beans, following some Martha Stewart recipe. You soak the beans in vodka for several weeks then remove the beans and what is left is vanilla extract.

Onathan

Ri Zu isn't the one I'd worry for. It's more like "run various cultivators in the competition, run!"

J B

Oh gawd - Ti Gu on coffee?!? RUN, RI ZU! RUN!

Kara Nina

Also the smart characters don't just get a 'smart graduate of whatever or famous for something to do with chess/strategy' and instead the 'this character is smart' is a conclusion based on the thoughts and actions of characters - and not everyone is smart. Also smart isn't the same as wise or experienced in this story which is just amazing. Gou Ren and Yun Ren's dad for example is nice and experienced, but he's certainly no genius and lacks the drive any real master needs but he's a villager, not a great artist and you just notice how limited his expertise is despite his years of experience.

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter. Cultivator on Spirit Coffee, could be very interesting.

J B

Better to be the quest giver than the subject of a quest, IMO. Also, what do you think merchants see the world as? An endless sea of quest givers with nice rewards, if only you are smart about how to get 'em fulfilled!

J B

I think you just boggled my noggin - Jin becoming Iroh/Yoda/Rafiki/Jimminy Cricket/... as he ages

J B

*groaaaaan*

J B

Yeah, Jin's chosen cultural outlook is WILDLY different from what this world is expecting. I can't WAIT to see the old-Jin's ancestor (father?) get taken aback by his offspring's differences!

J B

Instead of Irish coffee, Jin coffee? Cultivator coffee? Mana go-go juice?

Aesoir

FYI although vanilla is a common flavor now, most times it’s artificial, real vanilla, even to this day is one of the more expensive spices out there.

J B

And Ghu only knows what specialness mana might bring about in plants that Jin has no idea about. . . So maybe, "And other goodies as she finds them" or the like?

Aesoir

Considering that it was mentioned that “Jin drew many diagrams of different plants” while only specifically mentioning coca and coffee plants. The author left room for many other plants Jin may have mentioned, also he praised chyou for going above and beyond his initial request. Once she’s down there and realizes that all the plants he wants are edible/consumable she’ll be on the hunt for other “rare goods” that he didn’t ask for. I wouldn’t be surprised if she came back with coconuts and banana seeds, or even more exotic things (like vanilla or saffron)

Grasenrack

Author: thank you, I appreciate your work and am impressed by the changing perspectives. You are obviously way deeper than I on the metal quality and Glass production issues as I had to use Wikipedia to sort of follow along. In my perspective, this is a positive since you encouraged learning. TLDR: Thank you.

Skippy

All of the farming was just a long con so that Jin could lay the foundations for the Snowflame Cultivation Style.

John Brady Anderson

Oh, and sugarcane or sugar beets! He only has honey and maple to sweeten his hot chocolate, I think he needs a form of sugar. Beets refine into sugar relatively easily, if not quite as easily as sugarcane, and grow in much more temperate climes.

John Brady Anderson

I was wondering if he would also seek out peppers of any sort, whether Bell or a hotter type.

NoChill

I was going to make a Coca-cola joke but turns out Old school Coca-Cola needs Coca and Cacao. fun fact Coca-cola had Cocaine in it all the way up to 1929. P.S: Might want to fix that before it hit's RR xD

Molochors

Yeah, coca grows in bushes. Though it would definitely be worth to have some of those

Khanalas

The man just wants his fizz

Big I

Jin should also have her look out for spices, like vanilla

Jack Trowell

You write that as if we weren't all addicts to chocolate and/or coffee

Daniel

coca => cacao Since coca plants don't have pods, and aren't trees, I'm pretty sure you meant cacao. translation => transaction?

David Bean

I’m guessing he meant cacao trees not coca? Unless he’s looking to get into a completely different type of business…

Keifru

Mmmm, with chocolate he could make some dessert crepes. Yum

Julius Dubasas

Really like how you write smart characters. Each is distinctly different in character aand has their own internal logic for what they do. That you fit this seemlessly usualy in one chapter is brilliant. Kudos CasualFarmer!

John Pratt

Yeah, that's a really unfortunate typo

Kara Nina

Chyou kept her face neutral, as she processed the words. The images of far off places flashed in her mind.

Kara Nina

I think Chiyou's reaction was a little too short in this one:

Adam Rosenberg

Not to mention qi infused silk or poppies!

Adam Rosenberg

I think it's more the "Mighty Cultivator" expectations clashing with the "Honest Farmer" that's being presented

Adam Rosenberg

Well farmers ARE all about plowing and doing lines!

Adam Rosenberg

I would've reversed it myself "forged mere mortals into a company that even the sects would often step lightly around"

Adam Rosenberg

Well, it's Very valuable in medical terms. Right up there with opium poppies

Kadhat

OhHo, youngadventurer! Is it travel you seek? Hark! Fetch me the Beans of Alertness and the the Pods of Dark Temptation. Endless riches await you, look to the southern lands.... and beware the dangers of the jungle!

Connor

“ Grandmother had forged the company into mere mortals that even the sects would often step lightly around.” Idk I think saying ‘forged into mere mortals’ is odd maybe say ‘a company of’ instead of into and then rework the sentence to fit, it’s a bit of a… contradiction? I’m not sure.

Michael Maor

No, I mean it sounds like there's a fireplace they can see in the middle of the table. "hearth" is the floor of the fireplace, so a table like that might have a stone fireplace with a hearth below the center part of the table or an iron stove, or something else heating it, but you couldn't see that, nor would you comment on there being a hearth in the middle of the table,

LittleWhite

coca tree and cocoa trees are used to make two very different things

LittleWhite

Hell yeah, jin is ordering up some of that cocaine!

Enochi

Well I just read your entire story over the past two day and I am in love with it. Thank you so much for this. Greatly enjoyable!

jimmie lee

So was there a mix-up between cocoa and coca, or is Jin looking to bring the party to Fa Ram?

Digdug

Chyou POV was good. Ty for chapter. I like her I hope we get more. Any chance we get an update for the ones left at the farm? I need some Meiling time.

Arnon Parenti

Jin giving quests to new Player, git these seeds for 10 goldloons. Yes master Jin 3 dragon encounters and a boat 2 ways ride later, MC is back with the beans,

Jan Alexander

Its good to see Jin as the quest giver. Good job, author-san.

Carl Mason

If writing this PoV was murder, then you, my friend, got away with murder. This was very well done. On a completely unrelated note, was the line toward the end supposed to be "they both drank to a fruitful transaction"? Because to me the word "translation" feels wrong.

Imspinnennetz

This will start the coffee wars that will lead to the Magistrate becoming the new emperor.

Artur Vogt

I like this delevelopement

crusaderstar

I received email! Also nice chapter

The Lost Pages

This was most excellent. Thanks for writing it.

Daniel Preston

Yep it sounds like that's because that's what it is. Something like this https://media-cdn.tripadvisor.com/media/photo-s/0d/f1/e9/ef/an-traditional-table.jpg

Lochar

stranger trees, you have stanger trees. You also have a fruitful translation, which I think should be fruitful transaction. Very good character in Chyou though.

Mrdelta

Qi infused coffee 0.0

taukid

Yeah, he talk like a farmer because he is one. Where did you think the rice came from?

Randall C

but if I kill you, there won't be any more chapters :( ... Thanks for caring enough to push through and give us another great chapter :)

Mrdelta

I remember some quest from the undead early levels in WoW. I liked being the quest giver.

Michael Maor

I really liked Chyou, sorry to hear it was difficult to write, especially as I'm guessing that means we won't get to see much of her POV. I'm a bit surprised Jin knows enough abut coca and coffee to provide useful sketches of the plants from memory. I was thinking he'd be restricted to descriptions of the plant, where it grows and how locals might use it. One nitpick on the chapter, this: "She asked, as we sat down at the table. It was a large piece of solid wood, with a hearth in the middle to warm our tea and broth. " makes it sound like there's a fireplace in the middle of the table

Seanfrks

I would love to know how good coffee with qi in it would taste! I absolutely love coffee, and seeing how qi makes apparently rice taste amazing, I am sure it would make the coffee absolutely divine!

Ironforge

Whelp, if Jin gets whats he wants and is able to make qi infused coffee and chocolate I'll fear for him. As those two things will pretty much end up sparking some kind of conflict. Since those two goods have done so repeatedly in our history.

James Squibb

If it was murder to write, then you are a very dangerous individual! It was a wonderful chapter. Thank you for all of your hard work!

Yshua

This is just one of my favorite things to read. I keep trying to get my friends to read it but I’m striking out. Someone give me a better elevator pitch! :D

WyldFyr3 Damon

U mentioned it was murder to write, but I feel that u pulled it off very well. Her motivations are clear without being vapid or one dimensional. You left plenty of room for her to expand as a character. Well we have a clear understanding of her motivations atm, we still don't know Her yet like we do the other characters so u have plenty of room to pick a direction to develop her even more fully and keep from being a stale, flat character. So good job and don't stress so much, ur doing good.

Havefeith

Heh. It may not be a starting line like "It's Dangerous to go Alone, Take This!" But it'd still be an interesting Questline, "Finding Coffee, so you can Ask If They Want to Come in for Some After a Successful Date!" Yes, the capitailzation is needed i this case, makes it look more dynamic.

Sassy

I love that he is making an effort to find stuff he wants. Many other isekai just have the protagonist bitch and moan about not having it or getting dumped on them without any effort.

Troy

New favorite character. You did great.

Empty Shelf

So, once Jin has the still, he'll have cultivated alcohol. If Chyou succeeds, he'll have cultivated coffee. The world isn't ready.

Bonifacio Mario Peña Jr.

She's interested now. And when he produces chocolate she'll fall in love. When he roasts coffee she'll kneel in worship. And when the hospital stands she will receive a medical plan. Truly the most inciting of incentives

Ashlazaria

It may have been murder - but, it was so well done :)

Eric Hicks

Thanks for the chapter, I do like this version of Chyou a lot more than the original first look at her, perhaps that is simply because of the deeper look.

Gary Hixenbaugh

Great chapter

Andrew Jones

i love this book so much

on the upside

thanks for the chapter


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