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v2 c78: Aftermath

🕑 Added 2021-11-16 03:28:25 +0000 UTC

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Steven Whitfield

I laughed out loud at the last paragraph!

Mondred

Thx for the chapter. "His face was flushed, he nervously glanced back at his junior disciple" ->"junior brother"? unless he already took a disciple.

Sanairb

All the statues would have to be of a nude Jin though.

paul Emmer

Very well done

Faolen

Headbutt!!

Red Viking

The Grass has finally returned to the Earth.

Nick Marini

Beautiful form from Xiulan. Learning from the best.

BrauBaer

Funny, beautiful and fucking wholesome. I was smiling from beginning to end. Thank you for the chapter! <3

Sam

Really great chapter. This is the kind of chapter that made me subscribe to the patreon. And though it is clearly stated that it was not beautiful or elegant, my mental image of a distracted Xulian turning her head at a charging opponent and laying them out with a headbutt is magnificent. **chef's kiss** One note, take it or leave it. The flow of this sentence bugged me, it needs a pause in between "Brother" and "having": "As the ripples settled from her arrival, her Junior Brother having swiftly retreated from the overtly flirty woman was sitting with the boy Xianghua had brought with her" Dashes might be a good fix. Something like: "As the ripples settled from her arrival, her Junior Brother–having retreated swiftly from the overtly flirty woman–was sitting with the boy Xianghua had brought with her."

Manga Muse

Really glad to have discovered this series and your work. I genuinely feel like I strive to be a better person after reading. Proud to be a patron and am looking forward to the following chapters :)

Randall Norman Pick

Honestly given her usual moveset no cultivator would see that one coming.

Nicholas Grey

The man’s face had flushed at the attention from Tigu. He’d squared his shoulders, glanced at his junior for a moment then marched over to Tigu. Tigu cocked her head to the side. Her eyes shone as she looked over the piece and its intricate detailing. There needs to be some visible text break or marker between these two paragraphs here to indicate that the opening scene is inserted.

FlawlessMovement

That’s so genuinely funny. I love it

ericksond

Very nice. Read this early before work. Refreshing.

Adam Rosenberg

Is headbutting against the rules?

Nick

Did Xulian just get herself disqualified from the tournament by headbutting someone ?

Morgan

Truly a story worth reading

A K

Yeah, the ending was really dramatic :-)

TheOne320

Loved this chapter. The headbutt at the end was epic.

Rairarku

Honestly, yeah. Everyone looks at her atk and dex stats, as if her charisma isn't as high as though two.

TheOne320

I really think she likes him as a brother. She has never made any subconscious reacts to him.

reji

Who teach her headbutting? Tigu?

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Chad Hagner

Loved this chapter, and the headbutt finish was perfect!

Zeta

All that's left is for Jin to arrive and beat up that impostor for the second time

Oliver Wolfe

His brother got a mystic sword from his unknown ancient ancestor guardian spirit, so both brothers are doing pretty well on vacuuming up the tropes from Jin right now!

Casualfarmer

A very minor character that was brought up again. the girl who was rude to Tigu in the first restaurant and git blasted with Tigu's intent.

Eric Bloom

Who's the girl with the beautiful brooch that tigu'er calls her friend? I feel like I missed something.

Jan Alexander

Haha. Headbutt finish.

fbt

talking is only a small part of personal interactions, ofc; actions, reactions, glances, pauses, silence, expressions, etc. It's a nice interaction chapter that isn't all talky (I'm reading another story where the author totally doesn't get this). I admire this when it's done well.

Joel Bullock

Daaamn Xuilyn with the classic headbutt

Gabriel

Very fun and I think it really captured something about being at a gathering with changing perspectives.

taukid

Just imagine watching that perfect, graceful young mistress headbutt someone into the ground, lol

The Lost Pages

For as little talking as happened in this chapter, this is one if my favorites from the tournament arc. We'll done.

J03MAN

It seemed almost explicit to me given the last two chapters.

IG884HIRE

I'm getting a vague "on the autism spectrum" feeling from Xianghua. That just me reading into her odd personality, or is that actually what's going on?

Eric

Get me a quote and I'll consider it.

James

I was thinking something similar about how Jin might have interesting input for the modified pill furnace the kid made for his sister. Be interesting to see what Casual does with these newer characters.

STORRM

oh my god man that was so good, so satisfying, so refreshing. I kinda want to see Gou Ren end up with an accidental harem now, like all the anime tropes Jin is trying to avoid happing to Gou Ren and Jin just standing off to the side shaking his head. its only right that the anime training he did should result in anime tropes happing to him.

Nick

Thanks for the chapter

Sean McClain

I hope they offer the crippled little brother an invitation to the farm so with Jin's modern knowledge and Meiling healing arts may be able to fix it.

SuperiorFreak

First, profound mudballs. Now, profound headbutts. Truly Earth Chan is a wise master.

Undead Writer

Worth the wait! Love it! Thanks for the chapter!

Bonifacio Mario Peña Jr.

And so the framed sun sect became a renowned photography club. Traveling the world with their camera crystals in search of new vistas to take home. Developing new and varied techniques for both photography and martial arts from the sun cutting through the darkest of jungles, spreading it's light and warmth through the coldest land scapes, And turning scorching deserts into blinding mirrors of heat and light This is not that story. In other news, Tigu shall carve a series of statues in hermetic iron. And the sect shall use them to teach it's techniques instead of scrolls. They also get a bunch of fan girls because anime.

Kara Nina

I think someone is getting just a tiny little bit jealous.

Eric Hutchinson

This was a great chapter

mhaj58

Someone commission the artist to draw an illustration of that last scene with Xuilan and the headbutt

Andrew

Thank you!

Nicholas Grey

I LOVED this chapter. Lots of character development for Lanlan, and a much needed boot up the rear! A few notes: "Xianghua had let Gou Ren go without much complaint, Simply smiling as Gou Ren started his conversation with her brother as she was accosted by Tigu." - simply (no capital). Also, two "as" in quick succession - perhaps "when Gou Ren"? "Tie Delun, entering the establishment which was a bit strange." - "establishment, which" (otherwise it means that the establishment was strange) “A good time” Rags declared - "A good time!" "A carving of Tie Delun stared back, his muscles bulging as he and his hammer in mid-motion as he delivered a strike to an opponent." - the sentence doesn't parse correctly. Perhaps "his muscles bulging in mid-motion as he and his hammer delivered a strike", or "his muscles bulging, he and his hammer captured in mid-motion as he..." “As you Say Miss Rou.", - "As you say, Miss Rou." (capital, comma) "had rejected her.Xiulan looked" - space after full stop "Have you heard of the one with the Whore and the Donkey?" - either "the one called the Whore and the Donkey" (capitals for a song title) or "the one with the whore and the donkey" (no capitals needed) "Several shirts ahd come off" - had "himself forwards.Her own destiny." - missing space "What happened next was not beautiful nor elegant." - "neither beautiful nor elegant" or "not beautiful, nor elegant"

Purpose of empower

love it thanks!

Bobtur

Do you like lemons ?

Gary Hixenbaugh

Excellent, well worth the wait.

Undead Writer

ITS HERE!!

Undead Writer

YEEEEESSSS!!!!

Rallaster

Damn, those last 2 lines though. I laughed so hard I cried. Phenomenal chapter!

AlbusScitus

I have to say this is a great chapter. It's tone fits perfectly with the rest of the story and is an awesome follow up to the climax of the previous chapter. It also wraps things up in a semi tidy way, leaving some plot threads alive, but otherwise is a satisfying conclusion to this mini-arc.

Nicholas Grey

I think everyone underestimates Ti Gu's charisma as a dominating stat...

Yeeeees

Darune Albane

... nice ending to the fight 😂

Jake

That was just fun to read!

Ask-if-I-like-lemons

It's amazing as always! I gotta tell you man. Out of all my Patreon subscriptions, this has been by far the most worth it.

Qrystof

I hope it was one of Jin Rou's moves. God, I'd love for him to just have arrived and see or hear about it.

Sean Ulrich

Xiulan uses Headbutt! Critical hit! It’s super effective!

Gam

The holy text has come Jonathan!


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