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v2c92.3: Change part 3.

🕑 Added 2022-02-05 23:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Devin Jones

OMG! Tigu and a puppy!

Joselito Sto Tomas aka Bill_Halsey

"All I would have to show for the entire meeting was a scroll written from the Elders of the Shrouded Mountain, and a whole load of stress." What, no T-shirt?

BZD

And I could totally imagine him being like the younger brother to Tigu.

BZD

Is Jin ever going to get a dog? Every good farm needs a sheepdog of some sort.

BZD

Handsome man finding out he was in the friend zone the whole time.

General Use Only

During this period, would the Shrouded Mountain Sect re-examine other members for possible intrusion?

paul Emmer

CF Just want you to know how much we appreciate your work and though I can't speak for any one else,I hope you take at least 3 weeks off after you finish the second book When you return Just do 2 chapters a week and make them longer when you can you are too good of a writer and this is too good of a story to be lost to burn out I'm here to stay and will continue to support you even if you were to make these changes thanks for what you do Sincerely Paul Emmer

It just grows into a smallish mountain and Jin says, "oh that's a nice trick, does it normally do that? "

Harish

Monday, Wednesday, Friday. There can be delays due to editing or other circumstances but it does stay regular

Ichypa

“I do not doubt Disciple Yingwen's assessment that this, Jin Rou, was powerful.“ Shouldn’t it be Rou Jin?

chumponimys

Once upon a time it was pretty consistently 1:30p ET MWF. For the last few months it’s been any time from 8p - 1:30a the next morning—if the chapter doesn’t get bumped to the next night entirely.

Shadow Gaming

I'm fairly new here, what days does he normaly post?

Aesoir

I was kind of hoping that one of the elders or the patriarch would “come to pay face” to the cloudy mountain, only to find out that “although Jin is not a member of the cloudy mountain sword, he is the sole disciple of Shen Yu” which would cause even more bloody mouths ;)

Argivian

I really like the implications of the Shrouded Mountain's moral decay here, good job!

Chad Hagner

Very well done, I liked the chapter! I like that Jin stepped in with handsome man lol and once again the sects looking too deep for meaning in Jin’s actions :-P

brandon sharky

No the stone will just get bigger while he holds it

Elijah Overland

Since Jin isn’t really aware of his power level, couldn’t he ask to use the power level stone they have for the tournament? It’s probably just sitting in a store room somewhere.

Demian Buckle

I just love how all these powerful cultivators interpret Jin's actions as some great scheme. I guess it shows how people see the actions of others through their own actions and perceptions. They just don't realize or could not comprehend that Jin just wants a simple life of peace as a farmer with his family and friends. It is not his fault that he discovered a method of Symbiotic Cultivation with the Earth.

Tyrell Facey

HaQi will be the national sport for cultivators

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Thomas Todd

Poor Handsome man, I really don't think Tigu is going to be interested in romance for a long while, especially considering she's a cat and he doesn't even know yet

Kasinki

loved it

Michael Foat

I had to read the line a couple of times to put it together myself. It really tickles that they're completely over thinking most of the situation in regards to Jin himself

STORRM

good chapter, few bits i got confused on, i kept switching Chongyun and Shenhe in my head for some reason, and "trusted another to death with?" i get what it means but i had to re-read it because it felt so jarring, not that i can come up with a better wording.

Great chapter!

John Brady Anderson

Yes, though he is that in the way the Black Sea is just a pond with some salt.

John Brady Anderson

Part of that reaction on their part is that he called the same demonic cultivator an imposter previously AND it would be quite in character for the incredibly powerful, wealthy, and long lived member of the Cloudy Swords to remind them of their duty and only “insult” them in private. Many great teachers in Xianxia stories will attempt to correct someone going astray in this way, with a view of how bad the price could be but an actual light punishment.

John Brady Anderson

Oh, well put!

AlbusScitus

I love the subtle comparison with the Cloudy Sword Sect. Yingwen fell unconscious after delivering bad news. But in the same situation senior brother Lu Ri just sweats a little but otherwise keeps his composure.

Den_Ai_D

Okay, I thought I was being delusional back when they first got named a few chapters ago but Shenhe having a "murderous aura" and Chongyun's blood turning to "ice" ( okay that's a little bit of a stretch but whatever)??? These have to be genshin impact references, NO???

Aaron

Honestly kinda feels a bit too short. Like too much happened/time passed all in one chapter/off screen.

joshua Miller

"Besides, what would you do if your daughter was abducted by a demonic cultivator that you had trusted another to (deal)death with?” minor typo

WonderBread459

Meiling’s also gonna give birth at the perfectly inopportun moment too

Alexander Dupree

I'll feel better when he can get back the farm for a bit.

H

They have eyes but cannot see mt tai

Heidao

By the power of God and Anime, we all know when everyone starts thinking demons are coming to invade, there would in fact be a demon invasion. Except the demons thought they had the element of surprise, thinking an invasion from the "weak" flank of the Empire would be easy. What a crazy set up for Vol. 3, a corrupt official filing a report thinking it'll be ignored, Shrouded Mountain ramping up its defenses for an impending "invasion", Grandpa is going to learn where Jin went to visit, and our boy is getting swamped into the web of politics as everyone in the Hills want a piece of the Fa Ram's good graces. Mixed in with Xiulan's recovery, the planned summit for young masters/mistresses and the ever growing background lore of what happened long ago.

Caithdean SValerient

Thank you for the update, as always it was amazing!!

Bonifacio Mario Peña Jr.

Kek. They'll be like " where is his cultivation..." 5 seconds later "ITS EVERYWHERE! THE MOUNTAIN, THE MOUNTAIN AND THE RIVERS ARE LOOOKING AT MEEEEE!!"

Akki

I can totally see this happening! Plus every time someone comes back from Fa Ram I'd bet they would return with major boosts and insights into their cultivation which really sells the importance of Fa Ram to the sects, even the major ones like the Shrouded Mountain Sect and eventually even the Cloudy Sword Sect.

Luker number 5

"He insults us by treating us like mortals." "Oh no the mortals I can trust to do as I ask."

Null

I see i see... manly finer sex...haahahahhahaa

Alan dryfter

How much you wanna bet everyone connected to a sect that Jin befriends and gives permission to visit will be treated with the utmost honor by their sect? "You were permitted to visit the Fa Ram? You have our full blessing and backing!" Although to the other elders his reasoning to allow them to visit probably won't make any sense what so ever.

S. Nutter

You have to read a bit into the fact that Shrouded Mountain (the only people talking about foxes in a derogatory manner) had chased off the fox spirit from the mountain. The same fox that is an ancestor to the brothers. There is a scene in one of the chapters where the Shrouded Mountain guys are looking for the fox den, but the new illusions the fox had just out into place thwarted them.

S. Nutter

Definitely worth the wait! I always like seeing what other people read into Jin's words and actions.

Kensai

Instead of “finer sex”, was it supposed to be “fairer sex”?

Sean

Anyone else notice all the fox discrimination. Like we keep hearing about them the same way we hear about demons but no one elaborates.

"Besides, what would you do if your daughter was abducted by a demonic cultivator that you had trusted another to death with?" This should probably say to deal with instead of to death with.

Michael Otton

Don't forget she also has the "monkey" and his stolen "princess" to make fun of as well, although she'll probably be to busy fixing the kids leg to make the most of it.

We kinda already knew that, did we not? His grandpa is fighting against them at the moment. I don't think Jin has a "bullshit aura", when we have known about this threat for such a long time

Dust Russell

Your doing amazing getting through these brutal chapters It must be quite hard, but it's insanely enjoyable to read. I can't wait to see what happens to them! Especally if it's just farming or playing mud ball

Undead Writer

Oh! I would love that!

Undead Writer

YEEEEEESSSSS!!!! 🤩 I LOVE IT!! The misunderstandings!! The charm! The jumping to conclusions!! It’s so much fun to read!!

Enochi

You know I really look forward to Tie Delun meeting Meling and her teasing him. She is a lot more merciless then Jin in that regard.

Jeff Scott

Yay! The overly profound misunderstands are back! The legend grows.

Carl Mason

No, the punishment would have been a beating and confinement to the sect. Maybe extra chores within the sect to starve their cultivation.

riseris

Well at least we know what is coming in the future, some kind of demons from the north. If only to make the Jin protagonist aura of bullshit creation correct.

Space253

The tournament is only every 8 years.

Folke Wester

Hehe, yeah.

Martin

What I am looking forward to in next volume: - funny Magistrate histrionics - growing legend of Healing sage - Vajra (the queen bee) gaining communication ability - Azure Jade trading company slowly becoming premier one in empire - Cloudy sword sect elders tying to figure out Jin - Xiulan getting back her lost levels - Next year's tournament in Azure Hills and much much more :-)

Alexander Hallonblad

Loved the dialogue in this one

Imspinnennetz

The funny thing is that Jin and Be De's investigation of the ritual and the demons defeated by the ritual is going to be perceived as the reason for him to be in Azure hills. In reality the cause and effect is actually the other way around. Jin is investigating the ritual because he is in Azure hills.

Gavriel

Amusing Jin: gives them light reparations Them: INSULTING, AND SUSPICIOUS! Them: CONSPIRACY, let's get ready for war, and a purge! Spend more than we would ever pay in reparations, TO WAR!

Shivrah

I love this story and more I love the underlying vibe the story has had throughout. Rou was supposed to be the typical cultivator MC the world itself is pushing for it, but Jin noped out and since then has been accomplishing his MC duties by accident and though unknowing and unknown patsies. First the house cleaning of the Clowdy Sword Sect now stopping a rise of demonic cultivators. Honestly some of my favorite stories are domino effects like this is shaping up to be in the background, meanwhile Mr Oblivious is at home making a new future for himself without the world’s insanity.

Nigel Franklin

"Besides, what would you do if your daughter was abducted by a demonic cultivator that you had trusted another to *death* (deal) with?”

Empty Shelf

So, the Shrouded Mountain are a little...intense. I can definitely see why the Cloudy Sword is considered particularly "Righteous" in comparison.

Robert Mullins

So are you doing a double release next to make up for the missing chapter? Since you already have the chapter banked.

Imspinnennetz

I also want to see Zhang Fei go to Fa Ram at some point.

Shadow Gaming

Good chapter, those shrouded mountain elders would have a stroke if they knew Jin was just a farmer with some qi

mindsystem

It's nice to see that those elders are pissed about missing the Zang Li situation, even if they're just holding back because of the Cloudy Sword. Also funny to see them doing the stereotypical cultivator/people in power thing of reading more into the situation than there is. I'm hoping that this will lead to some reform in the Sect and being more alert toward actual problems that may come up. I'm ready and excited to see how this section ends and for "Master Rou Jin's Summer Camp for Young Masters and Mistresses" to be a thing lol Also, I wonder if (part of) the reason why Tie Delun is crushing so hard is because Tigu is the first girl to say he looks handsome? She compares his figure to Jin's and others have described Jin as "too muscley" and basically being "not cultivator-pretty enough".

taukid

He means the one he wrote for Monday, it's complete but he said it would fit in better after next chapter.

Rustem

They MAY be right though, not about Jin, but that demon thingy came out of nowhere, so if they come from the area Jin will be a first line of defense.

taukid

I'm really looking forward to some of the various young masters and mistresses of Azure Hills visiting the Fa Ram.

Carlos Torres

I can only think that Handsome Man saw Jin as a father with a nuke instead of a shotgun.

Zarik0

“You can come visit if you want. We’ll go fishing and I may have some commission work. Does that sound good to you?” Tentatively, Tie Delun nodded. Forgeron get, seem this little sect or atleast little "hidden" comming village with talent and quality product begin to take form :P The real hidden power of Azure Hill and only people who go in and live for a time in know the real secret of Cultivation and live with the Farmer Dao Scripture, the only one and true way :P Azure Hill with Verdant Hill as the center i guess will become a real true power in the future, hidden in plain sight of the world and a rejunovation of culture and the way of Cultivation and how to live :P Hope they stay much insular in Azure Hill and begin to do thing in another way and different way vs the world and stop having shame for be "close" to mortal, can see a lot of laught on this and multiple possible interaction and how they try to stay insular and push or play role with other visitor, trying to stay hidden and out of their shit and shitty way and not want attention ;P

Rheklr

If you've seen Silicon Valley, every Elder misunderstanding Jin reminds me of "The Bear is Sticky with Honey".

Kristof Dohrmann

Nice, good chapter! Always love cultivators thinking shit is way more complicated than it actually is.

V01D

“Ahread of time”…

Michael Ox

Thank you!

Folke Wester

Thanks! Been looking forward to it all day.

REPOsPuNKy

woot


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