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v2c55: Past, Present, Future

🕑 Added 2021-08-13 19:35:02 +0000 UTC

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Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Imspinnennetz

I hope that Big D will become a lunar phoenix. I do not think that Big D and Rizzo are ever going to be comfortable with human like forms due to their experience with Chow Ji.

Justin van mele

I think it would be great if big d didn't turn fully human, but more of a harpy form to keep his spurs. Maybe when he breaks into the Spiritual realm of cultivation, he at profound 3 or 4 right now right?

AverageGuy

Jin's not the horse, but he's on his way to be the GOAT

Amit Gupta

Whew! I was scared when I saw the Title. I've seen a lot of writers write themselves into a corner by inserting the future (or a future vision) into their work randomly. Inordinately glad this was not the case.

Andrew

Thank you!

Summercat

Also I'm still waiting on the Otter. :P

Summercat

I feel a bit sad for Bi Di. He's learned he can't quite go home again. But I hope this does not put a strain on his relationship with Ri Zu. Reflections on the prior harvest... Yeah. Jin has come a remarkably long way from when he first arrived. And somehow I think his yields are going to be even better than last year - and I suspect that he'll still honor the lower grade rice price with the Magistrate if that were the case. He did mention it way back when, when the mixup was made, that he was okay with the lower price. I mean, it's not like he's doing this for huge wealth.

Summercat

It honestly, to me, sounds like the philosophy that grandpa wanted Jin to follow would lead to that. Jin is taking and making his own way through cultivation. It may not have been the path grandpa thought it would be, but it's still true to the Dao that grandpa chose to train Jin.

Robert Mullins

I mean, there have been fan theories about the zodiac since the first dozen chapters. So even if it wasn't intentional from chapter 1 it's impossible to add it by accident now. Also, original intent is tricky in this context. Do be aware, 'originally' this was going to be an ecchi/smut novel. Obviously he ended up going in a different direction fairly quickly but if you're asking if the novel fits an original vision I can speak for him with a giant NO. It very much evolved as he figured what it needed to be.

Robert Mullins

https://www.collinsdictionary.com/us/dictionary/english/lowing

Osamaru Ta

I have to ask, was the Zodiac intentional from the start? Or did it kinda just fall into place as people started to make the connection?

Corwin Amber

'lowing softly' lowing? 'was sat up on her' sat -> sitting

Imspinnennetz

A Horse, A Horse. My cultivation for a horse.

Slycerr

I want the gandfather to be like "I'M A GREAT GRANDPA?!?! OMG!!!" or something along those lines...

Arnon Parenti

I put my moneys on Babe and his 'friend' harvesting the most

Bunny Waffles

A truly comfy chapter!

Sean Ulrich

The Zodiac reference was on point!


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