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v2c61: Sect Business

🕑 Added 2021-09-10 21:52:51 +0000 UTC

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Spell Craft

I love her already.

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter.

Noah

Just realized that Xiulan is in the profound realm now, so she won’t really be able to challenge her in the tournament. Xiulan will probably be bumped up to a higher tier of the tournament or just be handed an automatic win. However, conveniently, Tigu is around her level. I bet the new girl and Tigu will end up having one of the most entertaining fights at the end of the tournament.

Corwin Amber

'One more there was' one -> once

Ben Allen

I think it was either supposed to be "hips" and not "hoops" or it was referring to hooped bracelets.

ThorneHawk

Loved the chapter. One typo, should: The clothes seemed to be calming down as well be: The others seemed to be calming down as well And I'm not sure what: we must discuss the resort of our strategy means.

Gremlin

Another fun chapter. I struggled to understand everything at the end. For example what does it mean that her hands swiftly danced over her hoops, checking a bit like Meimei...? Also I assume a "C" is missing in "On-e more there was a shocked silence"

Dale Tucker

This was a great introduction honestly

HumbleBee

I would give you more hearts for this comment if I was able to

Arnon Parenti

Gou Ren is set to climb two tall trees over there.

Termac

Enh. They're different characters, and they are the way they are for at least somewhat different reasons. But yeah, they seem to share a fair amount in common.

Termac

Good catch. I, and everyone else in the Edit Squad all missed that one wayward "t" hiding there.

Termac

Oh, no! A wild tsundere appears!

The Divine F5

I want her and Tigu to meet

J Klugh

Like the new character, it’s a fun twist. Plus given Xuilan’s upbringing, and the way it almost broke her ( you face heaven alone). It kind of makes me wonder if this is what would would get if you took a unrelentingly kind person and had them raised by an “Arrogant” sect.

Stewart Boyatt

More like: Young Mistress of "wants to climb Gou Ren like a tree".

fbt

i think the silly intent came thru fine at the end, although I'm not the best judge for a variety of reasons.

Chad Hagner

I love the way this ended, Gou Ren really finds himself in weird scenarios!

Luke Preston

Thank you for the chapter

Garrett

More like a “Princess”, I’d say. Haughty and arrogant but harmless and well-meaning.

Eric

So did she actually knock him down to save his life? She says he courts death by not paying attention which fits with the cart coming by and adds a whole lot to her character. She'd make an excellent mate for monkey boy! 😂

Corwin Amber

'for ther the entire' ther -> her

Jan Alexander

No one can resist a good maple syrup. Haha. Xiulan's rival has shown up? Haha

General Use Only

Haha love her already. I was wondering when we would get the stereotypical villainess-type characters. But this is so much better 😄

Bonifacio Mario Peña Jr.

Oh god. Tigu. There's two of her now.

Ichypa

Xianghua is amazing, I love her. Gou’s found a good one.

Guilherme Silva

"She hoped he hadn’t been searching for ther the entire time, or heavens forbid, been punished." Should be searching for her, no?

Nimps

Mate she is hilarious, Tigu is going to love her hhahahahaha

Damian

YOUR LOVE WILL BE LEGENDARY

Benji

When in need of plot, have Gou Ren stumble into it! Fun chapter =)

Artur Vogt

So a new love interes for him.

RJKY

Tsundere! Tsundere!

Mrdelta

It's the whole giving to the earth unconditionally, and reaping the dividends thing. Big De could write a book on it.

micah fortman

man why you gotta be so good at writing

aj0413

I just realized : sects all have some kind of unifying theme to their techniques and stuff right? What would Fa Rams be?

kaalveiten

I thinks shes great, lol

Alan McBrayer

That is the persona she is trying to project. However, I actually got the impression that she was a kind hearted person who has been forced to play the role of the arrogant Young Mistress, similar to how Lanlan acted before the Fa Rem.

OpN

He snorted, irritated, as *"she"* pushed through the people. You mean, he.

Alex Bennett

I think she came across as you wised it anyway. Arrogant certianly, but she did help the old dude and gave hime good advice, if in a typically young mistress sort of way.

Prent

Love her already. She's gonna be so disappointed when she learns the truth about Xiulan's power though...

Prent

hmm... that implies too much dislike I think. They're going to get along so enthusiastically that the house will somehow wind up on fire

Dale

profound 1

Sean Ulrich

Is it just me or is she the type to trade blows while smiling and laughing? Kind battle maniac type?

striderfighter

What is xiulans cultivation level now?

Matt

Tigu and her are going to get on like a house on fire aren't they?

Andrew

Thank you!

Empty Shelf

The Chuuni is strong in this one.

Robert M

Hopefully Liu Xianghua interacts with an arrogant/hothead cultivator, sounds like that could be interesting

Imspinnennetz

I agree that there some typos and odd capitalizations that are confusing.

Armo

OUR BATTLE SHALL BE LEGENDARY! I love her.

RainyCats

I thought it was pretty hilarious 😂 was honestly expecting an altercation.

Thom_View

I love it! Excited for the next chapter.

Ask-if-I-like-lemons

I had to read it multiple times to understand what happened back there lol

Keifru

Oh boy, Xianghua is gonna get on like a housefire with Tigu

Jacob

I liked her introduce, the super serious cultivator meets the guy who cares absolutely about any of it was pretty funny

That One Guy

I think the introduction was great. :) thanks for the hard work!

Imspinnennetz

Tigger is finally going to meet someone who is as annoying as her previous self before her transformation.

Luker number 5

You've just introduced her and I love her.


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