Torsten Hewson
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Small chapter 61 update
🕑 Added 2021-09-14 00:30:32 +0000 UTCAlso, after looking through Chapter 61, I've gone and updated things a bit. the plot hasn't changed at all, but I've given the person who escorts Xiulan to the sect a name, Bolin, and made elder Yi less outwardly aggressive. They're small changes, but I find it improves the chapter. Gou Ren's part hasn't changed.
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I think it's great though I woild make a small switch and change "So, what did this hidden master..." to "And... What did this hidden master..." in order to increase the implication.
Len
Bolin...from Avatar the legend of korra
MNS online
The changes were subtle, but I like what you’ve done. Thanks!
