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v2c68: The Azure Merchants

🕑 Added 2021-10-04 22:18:40 +0000 UTC
v2c68: The Azure Merchants

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Mark Greenberg

There WAS a scribe taking notes, he just wasn't frantic about it.

Midjji

I never got this chapter to my email, is it working for everyone else?

jetblackvalias .

Is Guan Bo just the front of house? Where’d everyone else appear from?

MNS online

Check out the Fanart thread in the discord, I posted some renditions (username Manusc) similar to your idea. They had a lot of imbalances or wasn't what CF wanted the symbol to achieve.

AlbusScitus

50 silver definitely feels low. A 40 kilo bag of dry rice is roughly 444 (90g) servings. I'm not sure about the conversion from silver to copper but at 1:100 that puts the price at around 11 copper a bowl before markup. That seems like the price of a regular dinner not a food that lords and sect masters may have once in their lives

haidbz

Personally, I thought Fa Ram's symbol would be more stylised and with both the leaf and the ear of wheat cut down the middle. A quick sketch of what I imagined: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1p1zgQuDyAf4BvHhoOcMEtAlJVKr15Aln/view?usp=sharing

Matt DiMeo

This is gonna be great. Meiling wants a scroll on cultivator acupunture? Boom, azure trading sends out a hundred minions with bags of rice to every sect in a thousand li.

Matt DiMeo

I liked it so little, I only read it three times :)

Scipio

You know that booze is probably pretty strong if it gets Jin drunk, or even tipsy, considering how strong he should be by now...

Nick Marini

Not exactly the logo I expected, but I can definitely see that on the back of a martial arts uniform! It’s cool!

J B

Tioma, that was my thought too. What if the phonemes for ‘Fa Ram’ meant something? ‘Sacred Soil’? ‘Greeeezy mess’? ‘momma’s nose’? Each would have a very different context for those talking to Jin. I am making an assumption here that the language is more like written Chinese - conceptual based, vs a more English-like phoneme basis.

J B

Agreed, Jin wouldn’t be the aggressor, but an uppity merchant might, as might other cultivators, sects, bureaucrats, inventors, etc

John

Daniel, Jokarun - If he was a typical cultivator I doubt he would be farming in the Hills. The fact that he wanted it to be kept quite should have been a huge note. Granted, he is one of the few exceptions to the rule for cultivators. It looked like a duck so grandmother/granddaughter expected it to quack like a duck and Bo's comments that it "moo"-ed instead didn't really compute.

Hamed Al-Ghamdi

I have to say, I liked this chapter so much, I read it 3 times. 👌🏼

Gremlin Jack

It might not have been explosive, but the negotiations were still entertaining, and felt realistic enough. Good chapter there.

Termac

Why wind power? He already built a waterwheel he intends to use for stuff.

Aesoir

It’ll be doubly confusing if the local writing is mandarin like, so that people will assign different characters that “make the correct sound” but whose meaning is wildly different from conventional understanding of the English root name.

Aesoir

All of jin’s names are petty names people would name animals (spot, shadow, hammy for example) since Jin names them in English and pronounces them that way, there’s no culturally accurate translation, so everyone there assigns a pronunciation that “sounds like” the English equivalent. Each person ascribes their own meaning. (There’s probably no Chinese meaning to the English word Farm aka the “fa ram”, but in 100 years it sure as heck will mean something)

Lochar

I'll point out the number of people in the real world naming their children some pretty random things.

J B

Thanks, Christopher. I find it… strange, tho’. Jin appears and sounds like a local, yet keeps coming up with names seemingly made of gibberish for everything. Bi De? Ri Zu? Fa Ram? Ti Gu? Etc…

Christopher Meeks

I believe they'll read Fa Ram, no real reason that CF has to stick with the actual translation for mystical Chinada

J B

What’s the literal translation of "Fa Ram" or "Fa Ran"? What does all the rest of the world think when they hear those syllables?

blackshadow111

Hm? Doesn't really apply, I feel. Jin isn't the type to compete much. I meant it more in terms of how in our world someone who got ten billion and another guy who got a hundred billion out of nowhere would be exactly the same. What can one buy that the other can't?

J B

Daniel, she failed at what granny told her to do. An apology is the minimum penalty, I’d think.

J B

Blackshadow - only true until another too-rich-to-spend-it-all type gets involved, as a sole source for something else Jin desires, a buyer of Jin’s goodies, a competitor, or even an economic foe

Yunru

It's more she's got obligations that would prevent her being with him.

Kara Nina

In the real world he likely would have been allowed to be at the meeting as long as he keeps his mouth shut unless he's asked to clarify anything - and to take the blame in case anything displeased Jin in the previous deals so the higher ranking ppl can seem agreeable by taking Jin's side. Also this scene is missing a secretary frantically taking notes.

Romen Martin

merchant waifu could always end up with Monkey boy. I'm still not sure how much miss Blade of Grass doesn't want to be with him

STORRM

i would kinda expect the logo to be in gold and red, black and red feels to edgedy https://gyazo.com/f891443d49da2362ee8600eadb2d61cc few minutes fucking around in paint 3D https://gyazo.com/0bf21a66fa8660814b12f6554b475aa9 no idea if there is a tool that can make it auto look like its made from embroidery, and i'm no artist

FlawlessMovement

Besides as a cultivator and healer combo she probably looks at the peak of herself all the time. Guarantee she’s pretty

Anthony Arredondo

Maybe a light blue mark since they're from the azure hills?

Space253

I dont think Jin has thought farther than a product is only worth what someone is willing to pay for it.

Space253

He should buy the gap between FaRam and the village.

Space253

The verdant hill town was the remote location Bo went to.

Swinter

Word of God (Casualfarmer) is that Jin did not, in fact, get screwed. Messing with cultivators that provide a high value service is not a good long term tactic for trading companies.

Vin Reisling

I like how he goes out of his way to make sure Bo's sister doesn't just get shafted. Very decent.

Kara Nina

So he's finally going to get his destilling equipment.

Brian P.

They are named the Azure Jade Trading Company. It makes sense to me they'd be based in the largest city in the Azure Hills.

afgasd adgasd

The inner business sim lover in me liked this chapter a lot. No bargaining either lol this company is going to grow stronger from these profits and I imagine that can only be a good thing for jin since they will no doubt bend over backwards to protect the interests of their golden hen. Jin is amassing relationships like an innkeeper I know

Brian P.

Yeah, Tigu got called it too. This has a good rundown of Xianxia terms: https://immortalmountain.wordpress.com/glossary/wuxia-xianxia-xuanhuan-terms/

Brian P.

It shouldn't be. At least I've got other stories that still send out notifications even though there's a tier above what I pay for. When it doesn't send it's usually because it's unlocked rather than posted, by my understanding. There's no super early chapter tier, so I suspect this is a one off Patreon screw up, as I also didn't get an email or app notification.

closeded

Getting strong Canada + Animal Farm vibes from that stamp. Looks really cool though.

Jan Alexander

Jin can buy more land after this sale.

Delta

It feels odd that they had soooo many senior members at this location. Your previous writings made it seem like it was a small location.

John Brady Anderson

Very amusing that his peerless beauty of a wife and freckle maid mixup cause Grandma to misunderstand him. She is probably sharp enough that, if she heard Xiulan was his disciple but he married the village girl that stopped a plague, Granny would get that he is a hidden master of the “righteous, pure of heart” type/trope.

John Brady Anderson

Is calling a woman “fairy”-healer/sister/etc a common way to call them pretty in Xianxia stories? I am not too familiar but Xiulan gets it and when healing MeiMei did.

taukid

He should ask about chocolate. If any one know, they would.

Civer

I am in a nice place of seeing that a new thing is released on RR and then skedaddling to here for the new patreon chapter

Ashlazaria

awesome symbol. I, also, didn’t get the release notice; but, very much enjoyed the chapter.

Havefeith

Ha, get rekt, Guan Bo's Grandma. Your gambit failed from the outset, because this one is monogamous, and only has eyes for one woman! The ever peerless Fairy Healer Meimei!

Calvin

plus he got free glass making tools etc. Sure he could (and was probably expected to) haggle up to 55-60 coins or per bag or something, but its not like that would make a big difference to Jin on the margin.

Ben Allen

I want merch to buy

Imspinnennetz

I did not get the usual patreon notification for the chapter update today. Is this because, there is now a new tier above the early releases?

Bonifacio Mario Peña Jr.

Guan Bo has been reduced to a cinnamon roll. I want to tell him everything will be okay.... Oaky.... Maple actually.

Nikola Nikitin

He's also got branding down so that when people see his insignia they will know they have a quality product.

Stewart Boyatt

@Mark correction, Gou Ren will build a windmill. Jin is shit with machinery.

Evan

That Jin will and is almost certianly thinking in modern business terms, maintaining a healthy market by willingly restricting supply so as to not drown out other suppliers, will be a great and very pleasant surprise to ATC. He's even willing to play ball on pricing to enhance the local economy. All those Confucian businessmen and bureaucrats are just going to be confused.

Stewart Boyatt

Which in a sense he is, cause he isn't just thinking with his dick.

chumponimys

Ooh that’s true! And all of Jin’s product this time around has the Farm’s insignia on it. The same insignia sewn onto Tigu’s clothing…

BRUNO ASTUR

They work with cultivators. They have the liquid asset.

JP Koenig

15k. They only offered to buy the 300 bags on his wagon. Plus syrup.

Lictor Magnus

If anything I think they’ll need more land for all the new families. Half the disciples are in relationships and for the humans some of their family members may decide to move in.

Hunendora

So, grandma is at Dueling Peaks where an independent Rou Tigu is doubtless being talked about. Now she's learned of another cultivator named Rou Jin in the same area. Wonder if she'll explore the possibilities...

PatronTurtle

That's so much value in rice the trading company probably won't be able move the liquidity. If banking doesn't exist it probably will need to now. Credit whatever Jin wants to buy anywhere they've got a branch

Len

Buy more land,  yes.  For grain the windmill is needed to drive the grindstone,  with how strong jin and the others are,  except for convenience, it is not needed,  just a crank of some sort,  hell, could mask the"crank" for the grindstone a stationary bike and drive it by pedalling.

Yeno Memevig

Maybe buy up more land around his place

Freon

Don't forget the amount of effort that the village put into trying to make some and only came out with a pittance in comparison to what Jin was able to produce. Jin's about the flood the market with more riches than it's able to support.

Artur Vogt

So... how well can the recording crystals be used for video games. That capital needs to go somewhere!

Empty Shelf

In fairness, the Grandmother was acting on misinformation. If Bo had described Meiling to her, rather than Xiulan, she probably would have made a different decision.

Jokarun

Had this been a typical cultivator I'd say grandmother would have him Hook, Line and Sinker with that gambit.

Brian P.

Yeah, his initial call for Bo was a slap to her face, rejecting her outright. By asking her for something else afterwards, he was implying it was her flirting he was rejecting rather than herself.

Dee

Worth noting that historically, sugar is RARE. Fruits were the most common source of sweet stuff, and honey was damn near worth it’s wait in gold prior to beekeeping developing into it’s own industry.

Gigifiy

And it's also a sweet. People pay more for pleasures than necessities.

Daniel

Eh, she did exactly what the grandmother wanted. It's not really her fault that the grandmother miscalculated and thought a pretty face would please the cultivator more.

Daniel

He has more than 2000 bags of rice total, apparently. Though he only brought around 300, so ~15k silver for this trip, plus the bottles of syrup.

C. Wilbs

If Jin is the only one that makes the syrup, it makes sense that the it would cost more than rice.

CatOnTheWeb

I think they see Jin's move as a calculated deflection. He told them 'I don't want a woman serving as my personal contact (in the euphemistic sense), but I am willing to work with someone of skill.' Basically they think he's much more crafty than they assumed.

Mark

I was thinking since he has the river he might plant wheat and create a windmill. Would be an interesting addition.

John

I can see Chyou apologizing to her grandmother about coming on way too strong to fast. For Master Jin to see it and immediately decide he did not need that in his life, which Bo will likely confirm given that Master Jin wants a quite life. Having a very flirty woman around doesn't add to that life.

nemo1986

Probably but he is still making a shit ton of cash. 1800 bags times 50 silver equals 90k silver. Plus he gets a solid relationship with a good trading company and the price isn't fixed

John

I don't think he got screwed too badly, given that they are trying to keep him happy and that gold grade rice is hard to get, means that they can't try to screw him too badly.

Torbjørn Nilsen

Jin: "OBJECTION!", he is just a simple farmer after all. Bo is more than good enough.

Lictor Magnus

That was great. Also the logo looks awesome! I wonder what he’s going to do with all that money. He’s pretty self sufficient so I could only see him investing in medical scrolls and the village. I guess he could get some new crops too.

blackshadow111

That makes sense, I suppose. In any case, once it crosses the 'more than I can spend in a lifetime' mark, all amounts of money are equal.

Casualfarmer

The syrup is a much bigger deal, honestly speaking. While the rice is rare+Qi... the syrup is rare +qi +unknown new thing. Also.. Jin has 32 bottles of syrup. he has over 2,000 bags of rice.

Mantiqore

I don't understand the calculating look, but the rest of the chapter is pretty good. I always love to giggle about some of those moments

blackshadow111

Huh. 50 Silver seems... Low. At least compared to the Maple Syrup being worth more than twice that per bottle. Or the Syrup is that much bigger a deal I suppose.

Bunny Waffles

I completely forgot how he had mistaken our dear Blade of Grass for Jins wife instead of the freckly Mei Mei.

Dale

I'm pretty sure jin got screwed on the rce.


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