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Costume prep

🕑 Added 2021-10-06 17:12:30 +0000 UTC

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filthycabbages

Just noticed, this is missing fishnets as mentioned in V2

B L

Harems and poly are not the same thing. Genuine, organic romance between three or more people is very rare, and it's a nice surprise when authors take it seriously. I hate it when people call images showing multiple people in love a 'harem'. I'm not opposed at all about these three becoming a triad or something. People may also confuse a poly V relationship as a harem, but they are also different. But from what I've seen, they would most likely go the triad route. If the characters want to coninue growing their relationships, that is. Nothing wrong with great platonic friendships.

B L

Yeah, and he will struggle against it by... not building a harem. Maybe there will great platonic friendships, but maybe they will fall in love with each other organically... and form an actual, genuine triad poly romance. All in all, I love all three of these characters, They deserve happiness.

B L

Or how about a genuine, organic poly romance between the three of them? Harems can stuff it, IMHO. Tho love how you twisted everyone's expectations with your comment, lol.

B L

Just to point out, a poly triad or V is not the same thing as a harem, and I too think this shouldn't be a harem story. The former is a genuine, organic romance between three or more people. I hate harems. Also, I love all three characters, and love seeing them happy. I want to see genuine, real stuff. Not harems. But that's if they want to, as a team. Some good platonic friendship is fine, if they don't. Also, 'Xiulan does not deserve anyone less than Jin and Mei to be honest.' is just so much more genuine and paragon. Like, look at the image. They are not looking at the camera, they are looking at *each other*

B L

SuperiorFreak

@P.R. Bakker I actually hate Harems. But for this story, I find myself actually rooting for Lanlan to get with Jin and Meimei.

SuperiorFreak

I actually hate Harems. But for some reason I find myself hoping Lanlan gets with Jin and Meimei.

Messe

I can see Meiling wanting to dess up Xuilan. I don't think it cheapens the characters at all.

P.R. Bakker

Love it just let the narrow minds moan about improper all they want.

Sky Horse

Yes you're right, but Jin must fight against the tropes as he has since chapter 1 lol

Lochar

He already shot down Rou's (old self) suggestion for Dao Companions during a dream sequence a while back.

Sky Horse

Conspiracy theory: I think this 'non-canon' picture is foreshadowing Jin's next great struggle with cultivation tropes... The MC harem

Teatime42

Drake, braid on the left is coming from over the shoulder, not straight down. This pic was an odd thing to open Patreon up to. XD

Eric

Sounds uncomfortable

Calvin

IRL people use this thing called double sided tape

Drakenclaw

Nice art. The only thing that I noticed and didn't like was the length of the braids. The one getting lifted has to be quite a bit longer than the one dropping down straight. Uneven braid length, why?

Untellable

Not a fan of this tbh. Characters trying to be sexy for other characters makes sense and can build their personality, but writing/art that's just appealing to the reader (fanservice) makes the character feel cheaper and less authentic. Especially if it's only female characters. This is far from the worst case I've seen, but I hope it's not gonna be a common theme.

Jan Alexander

Yes! Haha. Thanks man.

alex ayala

if this story was a lil paperback at the airport ✈️, with THIS quality of artwork sprinkled throughout? I'd buy

Artur Vogt

Jesus, now thats some art!

Eric

There are literally no backs to the costume, how do they stay on? Lol, must be mysterious chi shenanigans

Mrdelta

Thanks was drawing a blank there.

taukid

Meihua is Meiling's friend in the city.

Mrdelta

If I recall the one who wanted the other bunny costume was her friend in the city. ;)

Mrdelta

It already is a harem. Big D already has Rizzo Vajra and Yin. And that's not even counting his gaggle of nameless hens.

Ben Allen

I do now

Sassy

I really doubt it will be a harem. This is probably non canon fan service. I really, really do not want a harem story.

Sassy

Broke: Jin getting a harem Woke: Big D getting a harem Bespoke: Meimei getting a harem

Klatue

Damn fine art work 10/10 only problem is that I would think Mei would have slightly greener hair as depicted by previous art.

David Bean

She “Ain’t so boney no more” remember?

Ben Allen

Mei is not boney enough, she looks to pretty Edit: I forgot about her rise in cultivation improved her appearance.

Casualfarmer

Its Meiling and Xiulan. Its mostly non canon. I just wanted the picture done.

taukid

Is that Xiulan? I know Meihua wanted a bunny girl costume but I didn't think Xiulan would be caught dead in one.

Bobby B.

Mei, what a perv!!!! Gunna be a crazy chapter I think

Carlo Aquino

Where are the fishnets?! I love this art work. Is this story gonna be a harem? This is one of the few stories that I won’t actually mind a harem. Xiulan does not deserve anyone less than Jin to be honest.