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Unbroken Interlude

🕑 Added 2024-04-10 21:16:19 +0000 UTC

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Idan tal

As the main storyline is in a relaxed period right now, we really need more of this AU pls!

Grant

damm that was good please write more unbroken its awesome ! old sun ken

Precentor Van Zandt, Matthew King

Please give us more of this AU! It's so good!

Matt Grayson

Hah! Delightful.

Katharine Gould

@Casualfarmer why is it that everything you write is god tier? I literally can't find anything that you have written that has not moved me to tears and laughter! I would herald you the second coming of some famous writer. But it would be a disservice to you as you have by far written the best works of art in existence! Can I start a cult that worships you?

ben regnard

This seems like the beginning of a fun romp

Angela Roberts

I get that you were blowing off steam but honestly, this is good! Took me a mo to adjust but then I got *into* it.

jord

I was not aware of these AU's, tell me more?

Palmer Evans

Any chance we get another chapter or two of this timeline at some point?

John D Jones

I really want more of this timeline.

Michael Foat

Then, when they finally deal with the demon infestation a Sixth Shen Yu comes and asks for help from the other 5 to track down the Jin that went into the wastes. (Yes, I know Cloud and wastes aren't done by Casualfarmer but it's funnier.)

Michael Foat

All versions of the Empire collectively shit bricks when they realize there are now 5 Shen Yus they have to keep track of until the Emperors get things straightened out.

Michael Foat

Beware of Cloud Jin just kinda gets flopped into the mix and now he has 3 Shennong Cultivators and another classic cultivator that all pretty much his brothers helping clean up the Azure hills.

Michael Foat

So, Canon Jin, Yellow Rock Jin, Soaring Isles Jin, and Unbroken Jin meet up and start trading farming tips and drinks.

V01D

You know what would be awesome? A ‘crossover episode’ where the various versions of Jin meet.

AG

You’re welcome

Old Dog

Awesome AU. Thank you CF.

Kuratenshi

Thanks AG.

BlueMage_VT

I.... honestly have no idea how I misread this so badly...

Truedragon5374

Agreed. And let's be honest, no matter how much they sect members fear/respect Jin, someone is going to blab eventually. Plus Jin is thr kind of guy who just has to help people. So even if he doesn't get his own army, Jin Prime might end up with a city's worth of people at his gates wanting him to be thier lord.

Randall Brynsvold

@AG, thanks for that link! All hail the new Azure King!

AG

Here’s the answer to your question in case you didn’t feel like reading the entire thing “ Basically, in no breaking, They power up Tianlan, and exposively detonate the mist wall outwards, blowing up the Demon Gates, and then the armies of the Azure March forth, armed with Pale Moon Ore Weapons and armor, which would have been basically a cross between mithril and adamantium”

AG

Casual actually explained how they did it on space battles https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/beware-of-chicken-xianxia.910799/page-1846?post=100336408#post-100336408

Idan tal

He is talking about the fact that without the backlash from the breaking that killed millions of them, the demons were still at full power surrounding all the closed realm the humans survived in.

BlueMage_VT

My guess would be that Xiaoshi didn't alter the formation, spoke more openly with Tianlan, and their trusted friend survived and wasn't killed and replaced by the Twilight Cuckoo's Triumph.

Kuratenshi

One thing about this AU that was bothering me has been trying to figure out how the demons were pushed back. In core universe it is effectively the sacrifice of Tianlan and her original soulmate that crippled the demons and allowed the resurgence of humanity. In this AU, it seems like it was Tianlan and co slowly awakening other earth spirits. the demons got crushed when the world itself stopped being neutral and started actively fighting back.

Rene Christensen

Yeah not sure how long that will last once the land starts ascending with most of the population following. Peasants will migrate by the millions, especially people in the borderareas that see neighbors a few miles over benefitting. Who wouldnt move if it means adding decades of life, protection by cultivators and increased yields from the fields? Even if 99% of them seek out the grand Marshall and other authorities, there could still be thousands searching for the hidden master responsible for the transformation.

Lonnie Sizemore

I'm glad that you are taking a break and resetting. A few authors I follow are doing the same and are writing unrelated stories. It's really neat, and I think your fan base in here will appreciate what you share regardless if it's BoC adjacent or just you wanting to write about space wizards or Alexander the Great as a palette cleanser. Thank you for the fun stories!

Randall Brynsvold

Yes, and [Preserving Ginkgo Leaves] was mentioned in "Interlude: Inheritance of Ragged Leaves", 2/6/24.

Arin Storm

From what I remember, sometime around when the dandelion oath was made, Tianlan described what some of the participants' cultivations manifested as, and she said Rags' was a battered soldier with gingko leaves growing off of him.

Randall Norman Pick

Some things are universal.

Randall Brynsvold

Fortunately, Jin Prime already has Xiulan in place as Grand Marshal of all cultivator issues beyond internal Sect affairs. Jin and Tianlan have permitted and encouraged Xiulan to act as their intermediary, proxy, and guarantor of their privacy.

N0ct3m

this. i qols love an anthology of the AUs

Valderan

"Oh man, wouldn't it be great if literally the entirety of the population of the Azure Hills went to Fa Ram?"

Grant Daniel

Hahahahahaha! TLM will never change his desire for a “peaceful” position. And it is so cool to see the expansion upon different characters and different ideas in this au as it makes it feel unique but also of the land that we know and love so much.

Truedragon5374

Oh God. This is what I'm afraid will eventually happen to Jin Prime, thousands of people pledging loyalty to him, when all he want to do is farm.

Gg

Heh good old lord regent never change

Featherweight

Their’s a chance Rags found Equivalent of the “napkin doodle” of what would have become the golden tree style if things hadn’t gone boom

Just A Dude

It's a Doom quote. One man, standing against hordes of demons, literally too angry to die.

Lanter

There's our stressed, inwardly screaming official! Hahahahaha!

St Chef

Hey Casualfarmer, have you thought about having an anthology AU book that takes all these AUs you've been writing and putting them in one place for the general audience that follow your work?

Randall Brynsvold

Rags did base his cultivation on a series of pictograms on the wall of his "hideout", but it wasn't the remains of a tree. It was a "fortress" that "looked almost like the design of the Dueling Peaks".

Randall Brynsvold

... all going to be okay EXCEPT for the ulcer of the Lord Regent.

Andrew Denton

Pretty sure he's already living in the remains of their HQ.

William Johnson

Huh, Sun Ken and the Wicked Blade did much better in this timeline. Also main timeline Xiaoshi sure was a piece of crap wasn't he, this could have been his legacy if he didn't decide eating his best friend was a great idea. Also also, I loved the building dread of all this falling on poor Jin's head, and then the Lord f'in Regent shows up and you know it's all going to be okay.

Just A Dude

Is it just me or does the description of [Preserving Ginko Leaves] sound a lot like it might as well be "They are rage, brutal, without mercy, but you will be worse,"?

Randall Brynsvold

So in the main timeline, will Rags find and grow a seed of the Golden Tree?

Randall Brynsvold

Yeah, it's more obvious if you've been following the AU. Catch-22.

Seth Richter

Can you mark it as AU in the title? I've been skipping them, and thought this was the return to the main storyline... And was VERY confused

Elias A Rosado

The timeline may change, but the good lord regent remains a character from the Office.

Orims

Such a bittersweet chapter, knowing that this could have been what had happened that everyone we saw in the main story (even Sun Ken) were capable of greatness is kinda sad. Hopefully in couple more centuries this will be the minimum that Azure Hills will be capable or maybe it will have acsended to the heavens by that time completely.

Some guy

Ah yes mighty lord regent as stoic as ever

Kasinki

Lord Magistrate always the same personality, I love it. Thanks CF!

LazyF0x02

I can see why Tianlan worried about Jin's reaction.

AG

I know that this may sound ungrateful, but TOO SHORT, NEED MOOOORRRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lelouch Lamperouge

MOOOOAAAAAAR!

BargleNawdleZouss

Aww, I hoped that at least in this AU, The Lord Magistrate and Lady Wu Zei Qi would not be traumatized. Otherwise, 👍😱🔥

V01D

Once more, the Lord Regent and Jin are of the same wavelength. I have a feeling that Xulian will be interesting in Jin BECAUSE he isn’t tempted (or at least, explicitly controls himself) by her appearance. Given that she’d be a much higher level in this timeline, and Shen Yu’s comment about her appearance, she’d likely be even worse off. She’d already be friends with Xinghua, because of how Xinghua treats her no differently from anyone else, and possibly with Mei, given Mei would poke fun at it. An interesting thing to note is how Jin’s farming has similarities to Dual Cultivation, where the Qi is cycled between two so that it keeps growing…

Seaspike

So many alternate versions of people...

Kat Wilton

Ah, bless his organized heart - the Lord Magistrate never changes! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Lurker

😂 gonna need a boatload of heartburn and headache meds

Brandon Yarberry

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Loah

TLM never changes. We love him. Also Sun Ken is good now? Best timeline

Andrew Bazhaw

The Lord magistrate has been upgraded to the Lord Regent

Benjamin Lawton

Yup. Even under a different title, The Lord Magistrate will always be The Lord Magistrate.

WarStrider72

Thanks so much boss!


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