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v4c18: Leader of the Next Generation

🕑 Added 2023-06-12 03:46:41 +0000 UTC

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Cinnamon Toast

The chapter is officially tomorrow for me now either way :P

D J Meigs

Probably today, but late.

Timothy Dana

Is the next chapter today or tomorrow?

Aune

Tomorrow!!! (Day after tomorrow !!)

Arin Storm

Realizing what you probably meant, I'm not hoping for Gou Ren to get a display fight, as he'll probably get an actual fight when the strike team shows up. I'm hoping for a chapter revealing that he's been quietly training alone, similar to Yun Ren, kind of Rock Lee style: in the woods reinforcing thing, then beating them to bits. His fighting style is much slower and more direct than the others we've seen, meaning he might benefit less for sparing with those available, so he could be working to improve his stamina relative to qi usage(which was his main problem during the dueling peaks attack), and how strong he can make impromptu reinforcements on objects and himself, and how quick.

Randall Brynsvold

I'm waiting to see if he picks an aligned defensive tool/weapon, like Jin has a personalized shovel. What kind of large hand tool would resonate with an Earth-aligned builder? A surveyor's chain?

Just A Dude

People who don't like to fight are often the best at it, because they want to get it over with as soon as possible. Gou Ren having arts meant for peace that just coincidentally happen to be terrifyingly destructive when turned to war would be perfectly on-brand for him. You just need to have him square off against a real asshole of a Young Master that won't take no for an answer.

Just A Dude

Agreed. I think it's because CF treats them just like any other part of the narrative, with no more or less weight and detail than they deserve. Casual spars are mentioned in passing, while a plot critical fight gets all the attention a major plot point deserves.

Truedragon5374

I hope he goes all Hank Hill on them: "Boy I tell you what! You better get off my land and back to your 'shady hill' or I'll kick your ass!"

Scruffleupagas

I mean, he was on the verge of losing against someone who was several tiers stronger than both him and xianghua iirc. And even then its pointed out that when he goes to smack the guy with his random stick that the dude had to dodge which is abnormal

Len

It is all timing. IF Lu Ri is back, then it will be a definite slaughter. Plus htf will Zang get past..the barrier around the farm and village. If Lu Ri is not back, there will be some ruckus, but remember the hills now HAVE a spirit rank cultivator, biker boys(grand ravine) grandpa broke thru at the end of last book. Anything happens to meimei or the kid and GRAMPS will flatten the sect. Screw demons sect must die!!!(after getting the crew out).tianlan is remembering how to fight and is more powerful than ever, Jin can PROBABLY kick Zang's butt.

RedFaux

All the closer to the true Dao. Give to the world, the world gives back.

Paul Boros

They have no idea what lies in wait for them. Tianlan is so going to Nope that idea so hard along with Jin. Not to mention Shen Yu's reaction to any negative attention towards his grandson , granddaughter in law or Xiaode. Holy shit. He is all about zero tolerance and group accountability.

Randall Brynsvold

The elders that get to fully study the memories of Ruolan's art should be *more* impressed that Xiulan adapted the style and feeling (dance, operatic performance) and developed a sword art that someone with their current sect's skills and training can learn to use, without having been born with Ruolan's specific background and talents. It's useful and super effective!

Alex

It's a mix of both styles, with a hit of herself added into it. As a mix though it's already closer to the ancestors style than what everyone else is using, even if it's not a true copy.

CUI13

On a re-read, I am concerned about the Fa Ram. Zang from the Shrouded Mountain sect has created a unit to invade the Azure Hills, and I worry about potential losses.

CUI13

Except Xiulan was only able to create her current style by utilizing what she learned from the crystal, and by extension Ruolan. Therefore, while her synthesis of the styles is technically new, it is very much fitting the oath they took, to honor the past and look to the future.

D J Meigs

Exactly what I was thinking. Plus she’s fighting with fan and sword, which is more fusion of the styles. I suppose it could be a style Ruolan created after the azure mountains shattered though. But her descendants lacked the dance training to implement it correctly.

Jojiro

Everyone is saying that this is the art their honored Founder left for them and grateful to Ruolan...but in truth, aren't they all mistaken? We've seen several times where Xiulan commented that the operatic style of the past, while enlightening, wasn't going to be something she could directly use. She blended her own martial education back in, right, to create something wholly new? So what all the Elders *think* is just the True Ancestor's Teachings is actually this syncretic thing Xiulan has designed herself.

Randall Norman Pick

Not that it's a major component or should be, but your descriptions of action scenes are top notch delightful

Guy L.

Rest well.man

Sebastian Rubin

Looking forward to when she hits 1024. "A Thousand Blades Of Grass" has a certain poetry to it.

William Johnson

Have a great vacation! I love what you've done with Elder Yi, he felt like such a one note antagonist but with almost no dialog he's become a cranky uncle who's laser focused on the good of the sect.

Arin Storm

I don't think you're wrong, but he was one of the victims of an attack by a foreign sect, and was on the verge of losing his fight when Jin showed up, plus what happened to Tigu, and what would have happened to Xiulan. I think preparedness incase something like that ever happened again would be enough of an incentive for him to at least have been doing a little training.

Bable Zmith

Aye, good luck on your retreat. May your house be filled with blessings in the future...

Nicholas Grey

I’m not really up for that. Gou Ren fundamentally has no desire, nor any real incentive, to fight anyone. He never really “trades pointers”, nor does he need to demonstrate his power to gain legitimacy within his Sect (which is the core reason for both Xianghua and Xiulan to get these awesome fight scenes.) Very much get the impression he only *fights* when truly threatened. He’d be much more likely to take part in a “friendly” hockey or lacrosse match, or some cultivator equivalent, and completely dominate in that sphere.

Louisthau

Because from what I can gather the blades of grass go by multiple of 2. So; 2, 4, 8, 16, 32, 64, 128, etc. 48 is indeed not as it should.

John Grizzly

since it seems like gou ren is going to be pioneering his own style, and [Break} was iirc from Rou Jins/Farmer God's "martial arts" it would make sense itd be more of the farmer style martial arts, where the movement is simple and repetitive. so like [Break] [sow]/[Plow] but then also add in the fact that he seems to be going down the path of an architect/builder? ooof, earthbending all the way, imma wait till he gets op and just starts throwing houses at people.

Paul S.

Hope you feel better by the time you come back! Thanks for the chapter!

Nemo

The favour being the implied friendship that goes with calling someone by their name (and dropping official titles). At least that's how I read it. Its not as clear as it maybe could be but it's an expression I've heard before o.o

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Arin Storm

These display fights make me hope we get to see something similar with Gou Ren, given that he has one of the most unique cultivations we've seen. The only technique we've seen from him was [Break], so it could be interesting seeing what other techniques he's made for himself to fit his very straight forward fighting style.

Anzer'ke

I wonder how the cultivation of the Elders of the various sects will advance as they see the ancient past brought to life in front of them? Then again, some or all of them might not be able to reshape themselves to match these revelations. Which would be a bitter pill to swallow for any elder so trapped.

Nicholas Grey

“They wove for her a banner. A banner that all held the character for Azure.” - ‘all’ doesn’t fit here, as written. If multiple swords form *a* banner, then there’s only one banner, and ‘all’ implies multiple. That said, the character art and the next paragraph both show multiple banners, and that seems to be the intended sense. I would suggest “They wove for her an array of banners. Banners that all held the character for Azure.”

The Dapper Lemon

Rare is it that I read something that legitimately gives me shivers of excitement. So rare that I can probably count it on my fingers. The ending to this chapter was beautifully written and is now among those few special moments. As always, your story impresses and amazes and I can't wait to continue this literary journey with you.

BlueMage_VT

64? She's had another power up lol, I think last time we got a count was when she was talking to Tigu about a bottleneck and her 48 not feeling as powerful as they should. should. Loved the chapter, enjoy your break!

Andrew Denton

"Xianghua is fine, Sect Master Cai! This one knows all about emergency meetings, and I look forward to continuing our Sect’s close relationship!” the young woman replied from her place of honour on Xi Kong’s right. ... “I hope you shall return the favour, Xianghua,” he replied, and the woman flashed him a smile. I don't think that line works as the next line of the conversation.

Geese

I just imagine this ending scene with Elder Yi on his knees crying in awe like the scene in Kung Fu Hustle. Where the MC uses Buddha’s Palm on The Beast and he bows and calls the MC master.

Bulldops

Spoon.

ChanceOfFoxin

That was so a awesome!

yannick schwende

Thank you for the chapter. Xiulan's Performance is great. Now all that is missing is the music in the background and you have the stage practically building itself. I look forward to how this play will develop in the future:-)

Alexis Lionel

I say keep the spoon!

Samuel Wang

In order to master the verdant blade sword arts, don't study swords. Study art. Don't think. Dance!

Andrew Potter

Will this get fixed forkright?

JFitz

Although I appreciate the pun, there is a paragraph that started with spoon but instead should be soon.


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