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v4c32: The Scribe's Return p1

🕑 Added 2023-08-02 04:39:43 +0000 UTC

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Anzer'ke

Cool. Just to be clear, please don't take this as a complaint. Stuff gets confused easily after all. Just figured it was worth flagging for your attention.

Casualfarmer

I did some fixing for exactly this, actually, and I'll update this chapter

Anzer'ke

Yeah, and he is described in The Art of the Deal, a chapter that takes place after he gets the formation and leaves the Cloudy Sword, as receiving a report in person from the Plum Blossom's Shadow. Then he arrives in the province in this chapter. I may have my wires crossed but I think it's a continuity snarl.

Avdrdr

I believe he’s made 3 trips now, one for the mail, one for grandfather and the third for the formation.

Anzer'ke

Something is confusing me. Did Lu Ri not already return and take a report from the Plum Blossom's Shadow in v4c15 The Art of the Deal? Was just re-reading and noticed he seemed to have returned to the Hills twice.

Randall Norman Pick

Seconded, I never thought I would love this character so much.

Levi

Got him good thing he wasnt running this time off a cliff lol

BlueMage_VT

Always love Lu Ri! Thank you for the chapter!

Net

Nice chapter. Loved it.

Echo Sparksong

Nice to wake up to a new chapter.

Troy

For once it’s Jin and Mei who are dumbstruck! Fabulous

Stan Cornett

Love the chapter. Very nice lead in by all players involved. The Shrouded Mountain, the possibility of the Emperor's people (spies and auditors), outside merchants looking for gold rice grower (corporate espionage). Ahhh so much to chose from. Not surprised about the Plum Blossoms finding out about all of the intrigue going on (think spider webs across the Azure Hills). I so can't wait for the pot to boil a little on this, j

Barry Morgan

So, an Imperial Auditor and the spies of the Shrouded Mountain are both at Dueling Peaks to snoop around... at precisely the time when Xiulan and co will be arriving there and inviting all of the sects to a conference. What could possibly go wrong?

Umut Numanoglu

I'm hoping that the next project of the Senior Brother is a tea house franchise that spans across continent and exchanges ideas for best tea and snacks.

Marcin

And so proffesional cultivator spies of Shrouded mountain got sniffed out by mere mortals... hahahahaha


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