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v5c32: Like Ants to an Elephant

🕑 Added 2024-07-31 04:44:09 +0000 UTC

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CringeWorthyStudios

Is it weird to ship Hong Xian (the younger one) and Quiet Liu after this chapter? They were cute.

Aesoir

The secondary demons were attacking the people at the first den, the mist and attacker is the fox kin…

Net

Dude, Im at work. Can't wait!

Randall Brynsvold

Mist and Raging Cloudy Sword Formation work together, I think. We'll see for sure next chapter.

Randall Brynsvold

Bowu was also supposed to be part of that, and he's at Hong Yaowu.

Randall Brynsvold

Last mentioned in the previous chapter, just before Jin caught the lightning and separated out the puppet worm: "It was harder without Tianlan. She did so much for me, and with her asleep, it felt like I was trying to lift up the entire world. But there was something else. Something else once more lending its aid. Instead of Tianlan’s hug and warm touch, this was cold and dutiful. It was small and young feeling."

Randall Brynsvold

Look at the section that starts with Meiling singing to Zhuye, told from Gou Ren's point of view. Tie Delun is standing next to him, along with Wa Shi, Huo Ten, Bei Be, Pi Pa, Miantiao, Torrent Rider, and Shaggy Two. Chun Ke is also there with Vajra acting as translator.

Len

imo give it another year or so, i believe that both TLM and wife will gain the spark, and be able to cultivate, will they is the question. mostly due to eating jin's food. EVERYONE has at least a little qi- even bowu.

Rakkis157

I doubt it would be Chunky. It would take a lot to kill him, given that he is the third strongest member of Fa Ram.

Gwyn

Thank you for the hilarious mental image.

Gwyn

Orthos would be so proud. Considering Travis Baldree has done the audio books for both series, it's not impossible we get a cross-over one day. I can too easily see the Cradle/Reaper crew pop out of a burst of blue light into Fa Ram for a vacation.

D J Meigs

I think TLM would make the perfect righteous cultivator. Even more than Lu Ri or Bi De. I also think it would kind of ruin him in this story. He’s meant to be a prime example of how wrong cultivators are to look down on mortals because all the things they claim to fight for he embodies better than any of them. It’s part of his core traits that he is ultimately just a regular person. In any other story I’d be all for him and his wife to become cultivators and prove that even those who start late can conquer the heavens. But not in this one. I’d love to see an alternate timeline where they are cultivators though. They’d be a hell of a power couple!

Aune

maybe, tomorrow

Leili Mård

✋️

umbrellaes

Is anyone else is waiting for the chapter to come out tonight?

Mario Cole

Right? Casual has been delivering bangers lately too. So happy to be a patron.

Levi

i think Lu Ri is gonna use the cloudy sword formation thing that he has hinted he is close to being able to use? just a guess

Gray Code

I think that's The Befuddling Mists of Da Ji, as mentioned by Nezan back when he first met Yun Ren

linkhyrule5

Mist, huh. Lu Ri is living up to the name of the Cloudy Sword, I see. :3

Rune Shadow

This is definitely if not one of the best chapters ever one of the best chapters in a while, I've reread it three times the scene where Wa Shi finds his determination gives me chills

taukid

I mean, the amount of food he's received from Jin might grow his Qi

Alex Ingraham

Helping Jin as a stand-in for Tianlan I believe.

jeffrey niski

New minor shennong technique: [Country roads, take us home]. Washy going full Dragon. Little Chief is going to dance for the sun to come. Looking forward to all the chapters.

Bruno Vieira

Cue Washi in human form: Toriko mode on.

Old Dog

Wa Shi going to play Dragon Ball

WolfKnight22

CRY HAVOC AND LET SLIP THE BEASTS OF FA RAM

Paul Boros

Dead... or mostly dead?

Gray Code

[Cleansing Arts: You're Soaking In It]

Gray Code

Shennong is dead. I'm inclined to believe Jiguang on that one.

Abhimanyu Susobhanan

Otoh Hong Xian Sr has qi, and he could have become a cultivator.

Abhimanyu Susobhanan

It's mentioned that he had no qi. So he has no chance of awakening.

Gray Code

Hopefully the poisons are in the Suborned Mountain Sect members' blood, and not also on their weapons. Shen Yu:"Okay, _second_ weakest dragon I've ever encountered. Maybe third."

Evander

I'm starting to think the magistrate should be made into a cultivator. It would eliminate a lot of his problems

BigBro Bluesman

Love that washy wants to fight but he is the little buds protecter and escape plan..

BlueMage Theneras

Lu Ri DID say long ago he needs preparation to call upon the Raging Cloudy Sword Formation, and he certainly had that! These demons have no idea how badly they screwed up!

James Faulkner

Lets fucking go Washy!!

Laura H

I also love the contrast of Meimei singing sweetly and creating powerful medicine -- but also creating a strong paralytic poison that they all use, of course, on the enemy. She's a wonderfully complex character.

tim

The Solstice dance was originally meant to empower Tianlan. Hong Yaowu performs it in order to bring the warmth back to the land. Xian the Younger is definitely about to awaken a very upset Tianlan.

John D Jones

@ CUI13 I'll play Asshole's Advocate and say that I wouldn't mind if a few named characters died. Chunky is a really nice, brain-damaged boar who loves kids, Pi Pa and Fa Ram. Miantiao is... an old, sad serpent who's been a semi-father to Yin. Wa Shi is a cowadly fish-dragon who loves food and his finally found his courage. Their character arcs seem, to me, to have run their courses. With Chunky's death, seeing Pi Pa going "hog wild" with Void rage against demons would kind of rock. Right now, aside from everyone who basically lives at Fa Ram, you've got Bi De's group with Yun Ren and Ri Zu plus the SMS characters (including the lady they're trying to rescue) and the Thunderhoof. If they (or most of them) make it back to Fa Ram, we'll be at or close to the point where there's so many characters that there's not really enough story for them so they're just... there kind of taking up space. I'd prefer fewer characters who are active participants in the story than an army of characters who just sort of get lost in the background.

Paul Boros

Meimei is going to channel some massive Momma-Bear energy. Not to mention the Away Team taking out Huilan at an advantageous moment while The Sword That Walks has fun killing the creepy old man. Also wondering if Shennong is still around, given the training courses he seems to have invested himself in where he seems to be aware of Jin and TianLan. I am now positing that TianLan is going to wake up... cranky... given that her Bonded invoked John Denver...

Rat with a Pick

*The Dragon

Beggar of Freedom

Divines bless your kind heart! This little beggar has broken his oath just to see this and it is worth it.

TwoRavens

[Country Roads, Take Us Home] The ghost of John Denver is pleased.

TwoRavens

The Dragon Advances. The Dragon Destroys. The Dragon Conquers.

matthew gilley

Now that washy won't run, I'm imagining a swarm of bees holding up a baby flying down the road. Lol.

Old Dog

As always, thank you for the (incredible) chapter. Great way to get the heart pumping in the morning. Looking forward to the next few. What am I saying, I look forward to all of them. I can see the SM people waking up and seeing the lightening flashes and wonder which of their comrades is shouting [Demon Barbecue].

Old Dog

Behold, [The Demon Barbecue]

CUI13

Of course the stressful aspect of this arc is that it feels like SOMEONE is going to die

Ch W

Haha, good catch. First den, blond hair, and wall of mist hit me too fast that missed the surge into clouds. Mist and clouds are super simpatico, Lu Ri's fiancee better set up the barriers.

Gwyn

Let's go Washy! The Dragon does not run. The Dragon advances.

Laura H

Tftc! Next time, I'll bet we see how much Li Ju learned from Gramps about invoking the Cloudy Sword Formation, since Gramps helped him with advice and training as they were traveling. I'm really not worried about Li Ju! But seeing everyone around Hong Yaowu and Fa Ram working together and finding things within themselves that they could use to protect and show the others how they've grown is just wonderful! Xien, only 11 or so, is maturing quickly. Wa Shi has found his courage! Meimei has learned one of the sweetest songs people can sing to show love and calmness. Babe is arming himself with his plow and I'm sure Sunny will enjoy it. And the bees are just fantastic, helping everyone! It's a wonderful time story with incredible characters who make us proud nonstop!

John D Jones

I really appreciate this arc because it finally feels like Jin and co. are going up against actual dangerous foes who could kill them. The closest we've come to this before was the Dueling Peaks arc and even then it was more "Will Xuilan and Bi De hold out long enough for Jin to show up and bitch-slap Lu Ban into non-existence? Obviously, yes." Now it's a lot more dangerous because there's a lot more characters. I think Jin, Meiling, Xuilan and Tigu are safe but everyone else is in some degree of in danger.

Daniel

The solstice dance provided Qi to the earth when they danced before. That’s how the quest started for Bi De … I wonder if it will help give Qi back to Jin so he can keep fighting

John D Jones

Figure the corpse is in the jar so Meiling can dissect to lean what poison will kill it more efficiently.

Justin

Awesome chapter. Really great work on the level of scared/worry from the mortals and farm.

Laura H

Could they possibly ever be named anything else??

WarStrider72

Wa Shi and Memei's energy drink = DragonForce!

WarStrider72

Oh, will we get redemption for the puppet worm? Or does Jin just has its corpse in the jar?

Just A Dude

The part with Chun Ke getting ready to figt makes me think of two specific quotes. "Three things all wise men fear: The sea in a storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man." and "Demons run when a good man goes to war."

Randall Norman Pick

So many great sequences in here. Poor Lord Magistrate.

Pebble

I love this idea. Very fitting for Wa Shi. This comment even got me thinking of how it could work. Maybe Wa Shi can build up a sort of reserve of different elemental Qi as he consumes food that is infused with said Qi. His techniques could also be inspired by methods of preparing/cooking food. In order to replenish his reserves of the different types of Qi he would just need to eat the appropriate food, but to grow the maximum size of his reserves he would need to consume new varieties of food. Eating the same stuff over and over again would have diminishing returns. I think this would work well with his desire to taste new types of food.

Kali Smith

Thank you for the chapter! This is great!

Kenshin McRee

Go Wa Shi!

Gabriel McCall

Everybody wants to be a dragon... until it's time to do dragon shit. Wa Shi is a real one.

D J Meigs

These are some great chapters we’re getting.

Michael Foat

They just went plaid

Kat

I think Xian Jr is going to dance the solstice dance, and they’re gonna drum for him… wonder if you could rig a drop hammer into a drum?

Lewis

He's gone to plaid

SilasDrekken

Forever ago, when they first awakened, Gou and Yun fantasized about being a great general and a sword master respectively. Well here ones commanding a siege defense and the other is assaulting a demonic stronghold with sword-in-hand. How far they’ve come.

Namorat

Man, so many tears. Going back to sleep will be tough...

Cj

The mist of Foxes and the Clouds of Swords. Those demos will not see shit and will not last long

Leili Mård

Wow.. today I had to stop in between reading the chapter because I could not see from the tears... I never thought I could find another independent author as brilliant as Will Wight, but here we are.. and I don't even know your name 😅 If you haven't already, I hope you can make writing your full time job. You are a gift to the world. Thank you for the work you put in the Beware of Chicken 🙇

Nick

Tftc

BargleNawdleZouss

One-shot a demon, but more importantly, he'll discover vanilla, chocolate, AND coffee! :-)

leopard eye

Ah yes trow more demons at the expert demon killer. That'll work just fine.

Kasinki

The carp grew a spine huh that's nice! Thank you for the chapter

michael shafer

the you are my sunshine hurts. its what my mother and grandma sang to me as a kid when i was upset. talk about a stab to the heart. good chapter tho

suspiciouscoffee

you might even say he would reach ludicrous speed lmao

CringeWorthyStudios

Well, considering that the demons are walking into a cloud and then dying I’d imagine so.

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Sean Ulrich

I want Washi’s Qi Techniques to be named after food!!!

Lord Searing Simp

Bro you can’t have me start crying in public transport like that. Excellent chapter!

Ch W

Babe grabbing his weapon had me shook, Huo Ten and Gou Ren to be fighting on the same battlefront is something I didn't know I wanted. Wa Shi being more than what they needed was beautiful. Lu Ri fighting should be a sight. He's had enough time to prepare the Raging Cloudy Sword Formation, right?

Ch W

This has been so great with many stand out sequences. What is Bo Wu's iron dragon suppose to do to help? Him borrowing from steampunk so he can pull a trainbot into the mix would super surprising. Not likely but it's a dream goal, right?

N U

Well the artificial demons slamming into the psuedo-Elder that is Lu Ri with defensive wards to boot. They don't stand a chance in hell of arriving as reinforcements.

Alex Ingraham

So damn excited!!

Alex Ingraham

"'Tis but a flesh wound!"

Len

Where is ..THE GENERAL!!!!

Nemoboi

Holy shit what a chapter o.o thank you very much CF!

Lanter

The last time he took a hit of that Energy Drink, WaShi nyoomed his way into a hidden realm and eventually dragonhood 😂 Triple concentrate, he's gonna surpass lightspeed lmao 🤣 Ok, 1 down, potentially 2 or more fights to go 😖

Gigifiy

Poor demons are jumping right onto a Cloudy Sword.

Aki_Iokua18

He’ll run when it’s time. It’s NOT that time yet.

Aki_Iokua18

At the newly built fort, as part of the rearguard.

Havencross3093

The last time the koi got a dose of caffeine, he returned home a dragon. Now he's going off on a triple dose! What newer heights is he gonna be reaching now?

Brian Thompson

Incredible chapter

Michael Beard

Hm.... where is Handsome Man?

Aki_Iokua18

Absolutely gripping stuff. How I wish I wasn’t caught up, so I could read more. Huh, so both heavenly demons are heading pincers. I’ll be honest, I sorta expected the puppet person to head to the first den since they brought it up. Hopefully the first den becomes a resource sink for the demons. I love the twin charges. They certainly won’t stop the bosses, but they can certainly finish off the minions and bleed out a good deal of strength from puppet and butterfly. And good on the mortals fighting in their own way. Strength comes in all shapes and sizes after all.

Angel

Ugh my stomach is in knots and I’m kind of totally freaking out!!! Wa Shi, I love you forever you big glutton! Bring on the damn energy drink, this I gotta see.

Gamer Doyle

Poor Jin the one person who would obey an order to run chooses instead to be a BADASS. Dragons do not run.

Max Thomas

God this story is so good

Kreylix

Ah, it’s Tigu. So new paragraph also after “given.”

Kreylix

Awaiting “Arrow to a knee.”

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Chris Warner

Tftc

Loah

I am a dragon. DRAGONS DO NOT RUN. Orthos is proud of you, little buddy

Kreylix

Yin watched as Tigu uncorked a bottle of the medicine they had been given. As Tigu took a draught of sparkling liquid, the most potent they had, the wound began to steam and its edges began to seal. “Now, the true question is what do we do with these men now? Most will remain paralyzed for a few hours, at least.” 1. Start a new paragraph here. 2. I do not know who is saying the dialogue here.

Michael Beard

Omg omg omg omg!!!

Kreylix

“It’s just a flesh wound.” 🤣

BargleNawdleZouss

Wa Shi's Big Damn Hero(tm) moment.


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