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v5c36: A Chance

🕑 Added 2024-08-10 05:19:16 +0000 UTC

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D J Meigs

I’m hoping Nezan has a good armor of plot. His departure felt so much like raising flag and we know Mei Mei’s relative has a longer role to play, I haven’t been able to shake off the concern, and knowing Bi De won his fight makes it worse somehow.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Angel

Interesting perspective. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed each chapter since then. I went back and looked at the chapters after reading your comment to see if I was missing something due to the pacing of days between chapters, but personally feel this is all going to flow beautifully once we can go back and read the whole arc all at once. Maybe you’ll find your missing something soon. ☺️

Aune

Can't shake the feeling of something missing since the build up to "v5c32: Like Ants to an Elephant", and it's abrupt cut off . like, the rest are fillers with no substance in comparison.

Ibuks5

Ri Zu speaking in first person shows that it's about to go down

Angel

My heart was pounding in the first paragraph!! You sure know how to build the tension, then deliver on it big time! A few little editing things to tighten up, but I’m sure you’ll get those before it goes to publishing. Can’t wait for the next chapter, and thank you for publishing it even with your well going out, that’s crazy!

Angel

Not to mention everything she learned as a disciple of the Shrouded Mountain! She’s got quite the repertoire now and I love it! She’ll have so much to teach her master when she gets home. 😃

Sean Ulrich

Also… Rip… and tear… until it is done

WolfKnight22

Do not go gently into that good night. Old age should burn and rave at the close of day. Rage Rage against the dying of the light. I say show these demonic cultivators the meaning of fear and destruction

umbrellaes

I hope Bi De destroyed his cultivation but not him. He is a victim of demons too 😢

Truedragon5374

My Door and Lock are impenetrable! Yeah, but your hinges and door frame aren't. 😀

WyrdWizard

You right I did that wrong

Rakkis157

It wasn't that quick. The battle was something like 5 minutes or so.

Abhimanyu Susobhanan

I think East Wind being defeated may be an intentional mislead. It's too easy.

Rakkis157

Glimpse is also correct

Just A Dude

Very common trend amongst the troops that liberated the camps... and when things DID get reported they were brushed off by the tribunals at the slightest excuse of a reason. It was probably the most extensive example of "Fuck 'em, they're Nazis," in history.

Just A Dude

Look at the timeline. They came up with it independently.

Aki_Iokua18

Yeah, that sounds about right.

Aki_Iokua18

Minor correction; East Wind was not a higher “realm” but a higher “stage” of the same realm as Bi De. Given Bi De’s advantages (Protagonist Power, his techniques being super effective, his enemy being strong but unskilled) it’s not too surprising that he’d be able to bridge the gap between stages.

John Berry

This is awsome

Laura H

I hope your grandfather was able to deal with the hideous things he found in that camp, Truedraagon. Bless him for rescuing those poor people from the horrorsthey were undergoing!

Gray Code

Heck, if i'm reading correctly, the guy Yushang just splorped is Shou Tsetung, the _replacment_ Head Spiritual Doctor of the Heavenly Demon Base. The previous head is presumably still alive (though in a coma because an insufficiently suppressed Shenhe nearly tore his head off.) If Doctor Lan is still in the base, he's probably a high priority on the evac swords. If he's not...

Rake1810

Very good chapter, felt short but no complains from me

Lola

That’s not good. All of them have got to take a dirt nap. Need to erase all traces of what ever formations and formulations they used too, to prevent reverse engineering. It would be nice if they could capture all the artificial demons, as well, but making sure they have no trace of the project left is more important. If the experiments cannot cooperate, they need to die.

Randall Norman Pick

Wuxia style biometric bypass, you love to see it

Old Dog

Bi De would probably disagree.

Old Dog

As always, thank you for the chapter. Before the next chapter, anyone have any thoughts on the "10 poison resistance herb" that Mei and Jin got as a wedding present? CF: 3 rules of the demon Murphy: Nothing is as easy as it looks; everything takes longer than expected; If anything can go wrong, it will at the worst possible moment. Glad to hear you got the pump replaced "easily".

WarStrider72

Huh East Wind went down so fast and easily.... even being a realm above Bi De

Beggar of Freedom

Divines bless your kind heart!

Duke of Coffee

....... disgusting, they are truly courting death now they are caught.

WyrdWizard

She had once last glimpse of Ri Zu -> one last glance

Gray Code

The Heavenly Demonic Sect noncombatants have someplace to evacuate _to,_ and Yulong's last stage contingency is to bring the base down. I'd probably assume that they've got backups of the research at wherever they're headed, and they should be leaving in about five minutes... assuming that the evacuation swords still work.

Lola

Now that they’ve killed the scientists, they need to make sure they collect or destroy all of the research documents. Nothing can be left behind. Can’t afford to make it easy for them to restart this disgusting practice. Hope they killed every one of those worthless … staff members. Ugh, my head is filled with all the swears! I wish there was a way to make them experience the same suffering they forced on others, but I’d rather they be dead and not a problem than to risk one of them escaping. They should probably burn the bodies or dissolve them in acid or something to make sure nothing of them can be revived. Pays to be paranoid in these xianxia stories….

Justin

Thanks for the chapter. It's been a great arc and flows well with all of the prep put into it, lots of twist and turns!

Gray Code

Also, since they've been out of contact for months, Ri Z, and Han came up with the self-contained extraction packages independently of CSS Elder Yukong's idea in V4C11/The Senior Disciple.

Truedragon5374

In WW2 my grandfather was a lieutenant. He and his men found one of the "smaller" concentration camps. Not just a deathcamp prison, but one where they did medical experiments on the prisoners. Like removing organs to so how long they would live or seeing how much electricity it would take to kill them. Grandad very carefully DID NOT witness what his men did to those nazi "doctors". I think most of them ended up in the same place they threw the dead prisoners. There is true evil in the world, and it is best removed like the cancer it is.

linkhyrule5

Glad to see that instant Qi purification patch/seal that CSS made is already coming in handy :3

linkhyrule5

Honestly, I figure the sword disintegrated first... and then, with nothing to block Bi De's current ultimate technique, the rest of East Wind followed.

Nicholas Grey

Yushand was upon him in an instant, her sword swinging from the side -> Yushang

Kasinki

Take care man! Thank you for the chapter.

Angela Roberts

Totally suck situation with a bit of hope. Eesh!! Truly hope Ri Zu can work fast and that the rest can hold on. I'm on tenterhooks!

Silvris

Well, this is a bad situation for them. At least they managed to get to most of them in time to help...

Laura H

Tftc, although thinking about the gruesome things the demons and their minions are doing to those poor Shrouded Mountain folks is tough! It's a good thing that Ri Zu is able to directly counter and remove the demonic qi. All her work initially with Bi De in ppurifying the nasty qi he got from Chow Ji, followed by all her training from Meimei -- and all the herbs! -- has her in a better position as a battlefield medic than almost anyone else in the whole Crimson Phoenix Empire, it sounds like; if anyone can get the SMS people back on their feet, it's her!

Kreylix

Cool chapter!

Nemoboi

Great chapter ^^ I assume pile -> bile for Yushang's onset of nausea

Aki_Iokua18

Okay, guess I read it wrong last chapter. East Wind IS dust on the wind apparently. Shows me not to underestimate Protagonist Power I suppose. Hope Shenhe’ll be able to recover enough to help. Our guys need someone who can punch higher than they can atm.

Matsc

Oof, battlefield triage, THAT'S gonna leave some scars...

martin m

A chance is all they need. TYFTC.

Sean Ulrich

I like the thought of her having some form of synesthesia. Micro expressions and demeanor translating into different “looks”. Probably enhanced because cultivation.

BargleNawdleZouss

Combat medic FTW!

Austin

Thanks for the chapter!


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