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v5c61: Shenhe's Oath

🕑 Added 2024-10-28 01:47:36 +0000 UTC

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Ender419

My thoughts exactly! And hopefully Senior brother Lu Ri is present as well and she learns of him.

John D Jones

I'm hoping the timetable will allow Shenhe to be at Fa Ram when the Cloudy Sword Sect folks arrive. I want to see her reaction to Jin having left that sect to find/build something better.

Alex Ingraham

Congrats on getting another BOC book out! At this rate, we'll have to kidnap Travis Baldree to catch the audiobooks up to your writing! 😈

V01D

Don’t forget Wa Shi interacting with Bailu & Seilu…

V01D

Personally, I can’t wait to see Wa Shi interacting with Bailu & Seilu.

Caoimhín

No worries, the last time he showed his storage it was packed full, so he has abundant food to share.

Evander

I'm hoping that in the future, either Jin or Wa Shi get to compare notes with a spiritual chef. They've been mentioned several times and it'd be nice to see one show up or contract with Fa Ram for ingredients.

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Truedragon5374

Senhe: We shall leave immediately. Apologies for intruding. Mieling: Oh no you don't! It will be at least a week before the worst of your casualties should even think about a long journey. You will stay, and eat, and rest. Jin: I'd do as she says...

Axavia

I’m personally a fan of “The notably visible mountain sect”

Pat Sprehe

I’m looking forward to scenes of mortals and cultivators of the Azure Hills, looking up and just gaping as Cloudy Sword and Soaring Heavens pass overhead.

Jazer Andrew Sotomayor

Thank you

Casualfarmer

There was, on the free sites.

Isak Mark

I know, but usually there is a curtousy notice.

Alex Ingraham

I thought Elder Ge was Shen Yu's "dear friend" and the general was just a mortal general. Also, Shen Yu would have done more more than acknowledge the general after seeing he'd lost his legs. Shen Yu only noted that detail because the general had to salute him from horseback.

Alex Ingraham

I'm sure whatever "reward" they give to TLM (or his son) will have the recipient sobbing internally 🤣

Alex Ingraham

TLM's internal screaming definitely sounds like TFS DBZA's Krillin: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfdyHdrkHP0. Krillin's screaming starts at 0:17. Krillin's continued screaming matches TLM's internal screaming while the conversation continues! 🤣

Alex Ingraham

While Lani's Vegeta rage scream is legendary in it's own right, I think Krillin's fear is more accurate for how TLM's internal scream usually sounds when he deals with cultivators lol

Southern Mountains Loose Cultivator

Publishing deals for webnovels generally require authors to remove the completed parts being published from free sites like RR.

Isak Mark

What happened to the chapters at royal road? I was re reading some of the story and now it's gone. I know they are still on patreon but it's honestly a terrible format for continuous reading.

leopard eye

The fulmanation fangs.

Old Dog

As always, thank you for the chapter. It looks like TLM is taking the "invasion" of 2 major sects and the Imperial representative rather well.

Golden monkey

Fanged mountain sect?

Silvris

All hail TLM, who even in the face of sheerest terror remains as composed as ice. Truly, the greatest of mortals.

Idan tal

But it’s not shrouded anymore..

BigBro Bluesman

Like I said he can totally do it but the stress has to be hell

michel chamoun

It’s more than two elite spec ops team. This is a decent percentage of the world’s military power. So it’s like playing host a at least a military division. More likely several armies.

Kali Smith

Oh boy!! I’m so excited to read about EVERYTHING! Would love a chapter from both TLM & Lady Wu’s POVs. I’m also so excited to read about all the sects showing up! This is going to be epic!

Truedragon5374

At least he learned is lesson after that first winter and now puts ALOT more food in storage for the winter.

Truedragon5374

He is still going though ALL TLM's records for the last decade. I give it good odds that the auditor will burst into TLM's office to demand info on Jin's "gifts" right when The Voice is praising TLM for something.

Truedragon5374

Imperial Capitol? I thought TLM fled the province Capitol?

Truedragon5374

I'll bet TLM will try to pass on any rewards to his son. Who is only the Acting magistrate of Grass Sea city. Maybe The Voice can make that permanent. That said, I wouldn't be surprised is several of TLM's policies get added to the whatever guidelines Imperial magistrates follow. Plus possible Imperial interest into the new postal system.

Truedragon5374

HEADLINE: Small town mayor to play host to presidential plenipotentiary and 2 elite spec ops teams. More details to follow.

Truedragon5374

No joke, that fact that his panic reaction is to freeze into a stoic pose is a blessing from the gods.

Tanisha Thurman

I'm glad for the wait, because this turned out SO. GOOD. Great job, high five

ItWasIDIO!!

Combine more like to start a new Shrouded Fang Sect?

Mazerii

Should retire the shrouded mountain name and return to the original for the reformed sect, the Misty Fang Sect

TempestK

Not even a Demonic Cultivator, just being on the fringes of a fight between "normal" cultivators.

Cj

The fact that the lord magistrate kept that internal is incredible really

D J Meigs

Shroudless Mountain Sect here we come (can’t remember who first wrote it like that in a comment ages ago, but it feels appropriate). I’ve also dearly missed TLM. Hopefully we’ll get a comical scene that concludes the audit Verdant hill is going through as well.

sophie zimmerman

Thanks for the chapter!

Aesoir

Ooh fun fun! Now, since SMS is staying for a week, who’s going to be the “witness” of fa rams method of being strong, l vote “random SMS disciple.” Also on the wish list: old man ling forging a dantian in bi de’s garden, and contracting a minor earth spirit. Minyan staying at Fa Ram with Shen Yu (helping heal him), training Meiling (and the others), and eventually getting Jin to voice the same comments about her as he did in the AU stories. Oh and Rags shacking up with the Amazon/giantess girl from the SHIS.

ReadingOverSleeping

Yes Emperors, the talents of this nation has been pooling in this backwater Qi desert. No, it hasn’t stopped them from blooming in the least, they’re actually thriving.

Beggar of Freedom

Divines bless your kind heart!

ENK

That or Vegeta's rage screams. https://youtu.be/bd2nWh6wui0&t=105

BigBro Bluesman

Look...we all know the LORD MAGISTRATE!! can handle this, but...man I feel bad for the man...

Namorat

One thing that might be fixed: will it be righteous SMS or RSMS in the future? There are both uses.

Cinnamon Toast

Yes this was the 25ths chapter so we still have 3 chapters this week, next one will likely be out late on the 29th or early hours on the 30th

Rahul

Ah, he doesn’t know who the old man he’s talking to is, does he?

Eddy G

"In fact, here's all our funds, go buy BETTER china."

Valderan

"Lady love... break out the china. The GOOD china, if you please."

Azena

The Emperor is about to discover an extremely competent magistrate. I can’t wait to see what ‘rewards’ TLM receives from the super upper crust.

Gwyn

Yes confused on this as well.

Grim Heathwine

They were mentioned as being among the people in Hong Yaowu who were there to receive Washy's message after the attack. No mention of her being thanked, but I imagine it's coming, Jin pays his debts.

Patanahi

See thanks for the chapter CF

Calicofer

Wait I'm confused what do you mean this was Friday's chapter? Does this mean we still get 3 this week for Halloween?

Tsorov

Main Character, so Jin

Laura Hemly

He's been getting regular supplies of lowly spiritual herbs and Lady Wu has told them how much they help his stomach. So he's already being helped!

Havencross3093

MC - Main Character.

Laura Hemly

We've been getting chapters Tues day, Thursday, and Saturday recently. To get work that CF is pleased with, the days vary greatly. Two chapters in one day is pretty unlikely, unfortunately.

Mark Greenberg

Considering the "powerful cultvators" he wanted to avoid were in the Profound realm at most, while these visitors include several in the Earth to Imperial realms, yeah, quite the shock for him.

Laura Hemly

You can edit, you know. My posts would be typo city if I didn't go back and straighten them out with editing!

Laura Hemly

That seems very plausible . Unless CF disagrees, I'm going to hold that position, too.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Mark Greenberg

Yes, but that was before the actual attack. I'm looking for something afterward, thanking her for the warning which enabled them to successfully prepare and defend themselves. I'd especially like Shen Yu to acknowledge her assistance since he's the only one who knows who she used to be and is also aware of why she moved to the AH in the first place.

Alex

I doubt TLM knows who Shen Yu is. In the arc where he first shows up at Fa Ram there's a bit where they go to Hong Yaowu and some of the gang go to the Ren house to talk about the living disaster that's just blown into town. While they're talking, someone mentions that mortals tend not to have heard stories about the Unconquered Blade. His legends are more well known the higher you ascend in the hierarchy of cultivator society: people in the Earth+ Realms are going to know who he is, at the Spiritual Realm they'll probably have heard of him but thought he was just a myth, and those at the Profound Realm and below likely won't have heard of him at all.

Laura Hemly

MC? I am drawing a complete blank.

Alex

That's a very good theory actually. I'm going with that as my headcanon unless CF says otherwise.

Alex

TBF Jin says he had to sell a bunch of Fa Ram's produce for peanuts at Verdant Hill and throw what didn't sell away because the farm was producing so much food that a lot of it was going to waste. I doubt he'll care about having more mouths to feed.

Will Iam

Thanks for the chapter, its great. Also, loved the last part with the lord magistrate

SoralTheSol

Now we shall see the true power of the Lord of Ulcers!

Jon Dough

My card info was taken and I had shut it off, so my membership lapsed and I almost missed this release!! Thanks for the chapter!

ShivaMcTimber

Pass the pepto!

mag28

Last time we saw here she and her husband were in Hong Youwu sleeping off the vision.

Angel

You may indeed be right! However, when Meiling first encountered it when she was young, she could hardly stand to be near lady Wu, then later she described it as being like tar and oil (or something similar), which is how she describes other demonic qi, and then when she removed it the water turned black after she scraped it out of Lady Wu’s spine. So I made the leap to demonic cultivator but figured others may come to a different conclusion. ☺️

Baldanders

I don't think it was explicitly demonic energy - it was simply foreign qi, if I recall correctly. I'll have to have a look later.

Alex Ingraham

He really should ask Meiling for help with that...

Alex Ingraham

Shen Yu can tell if people are lying to him. No way a mortal's (admittedly legendary) poker face is going to fool him lol.

Alex Ingraham

... Spitting blood out of both sides? Out of his mouth and ass???? Lucky for TLM he's got the Healing Sage on speed dial...

StarBat

He shall return to the Imperial Capitol in glory. Wether he likes it or not.

Alex Ingraham

OOOOOO!! Great point! We get another chapter today, CF!? 🥹🥹🥹

Alex Ingraham

TLM's internal screaming definitely sounds like TFS DBZA's Krillin: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfdyHdrkHP0. Krillin's screaming starts at 0:17. Krillin's continued screaming matches TLM's internal screaming while the conversation continues! 🤣

Angel

She had demonic energy in her spine, which Meiling removed with her family’s technique, and from another description of the fight, I took it to mean it was a demonic cultivator. ☺️

Ham

Can’t wait for all the new visitors to try Jin’s food!

Alex Ingraham

You're both wrong. TLM's internal screaming definitely sounds like TFS DBZA's Krillin: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VfdyHdrkHP0. Screaming starts at 0:17. Krillin's continued screaming matches TLM's while stuff continues to happen! 🤣

Rakkis157

Wasn't the one who hurt his wife just a regular cultivator?

Tony

Is the auditor still around?

Golden monkey

Lord Magistrate!!!

Munsu

Being the Lord Magistrate is suffering. Even when the storm has passed and the calme seems omnipresent, there is always some chaos around, eager to pounce.

Arnon Parenti

When Shen Yu fights the demons with his dear friend, the dear friend is the voice and acts as the general leading 100k cultivators to fight the demons.

H

Party at jins house!

Alex Ingraham

I think it's safe to say he really needs both lol

Alex Ingraham

What chapter was that explained in?

Alex Ingraham

"ALL HAIL, THE [GREAT LORD MAGISTRATE] OF MANKIND!" I miss Emperor's TTS...

M e

I agree with both points! I really enjoy every time a new person thinks Jin is some wise elder or ancient hidden master. And I can't wait to see a reunion between the lord magistrate and his son.

Denielle Restauro

Just when their harvest was so good, Jin gets a bunch of unwanted guests. All that food....just gone.

John D Jones

TLM probably knows now because Jin and/or Lu Ri have likely told him. But thus far, Shen Yu has just been... Jin's grandfather. And then he left with Bi De and some others. That's a far cry from Shen Yu rolling in with Jin to announce that the most powerful members of two of the most powerful cultivator sects in the Empire will be descending on TLM's little area in preparation to unleash terrifying cultivator bullshit on some demonic cultivators. Oh, and the Herald of of Emperor is coming as well. AKA a dude who could have TLM and his entire province executed through agonizing torture and then make up a reason why later if he chooses to bother.

Duke of Coffee

Oh yes the internal screaming.

Pope Yoda I

"A'ight, but you have to feed everyone." "Bet." MC is going to have some incredible marketing potential in his future.

Mark Greenberg

Have we seen Shiyun (the diviner who warned Jin of the attack) and her husband since the demon's defeat? Shen Yu owes her some thanks but she may want to avoid the Imperial Herald.

Zeromaru2

It's never easy when Jin's around is it

BlueMage Theneras

Even the cultivators of the Azure Hills didn't recognize Shen Yu by name, title or reputation. They had heard the stories of his exploits but the stories had different names attached to each, iirc

BlueMage Theneras

Poor Lord Magistrate, this is everything he wanted to avoid lol. A literal army of powerful cultivators and the attention of the Emperor himself on the region. 😂

Guber

Of course the GREAT LORD MAGISTRATE is worthy of hosting such esteemed guests!! He shall bring much honor to the Azure Hills! ALL PRAISE THE GREAT LORD MAGISTRATE!!!

Arnon Parenti

I love how misleading is the "one emperor's man" when we know he leads a 100k army to wherever he goes and can recruit 10x that if he needs to descend on demonic cultivators.

Arnon Parenti

The Emperor's voice is going to come guns blazing, sure the whole county is a demon infested he'll hole, and the lord magistrate a demon fondler, and then he will find every record perfectly done, with tight corners and no cutting edges, with shadow plum agents delivering actual mail for mortals and the whole region is being purged and overhauled from the cellar to the roof.

Arnon Parenti

Have to pay respect to the official appointee by the Emperor's decree, people may claim the azure hills an end of the road appointment, wash out job or whatever, it is still an Empire employee representing the emperor.

Kreylix

SMS - Well done!!! Perhaps Lady Wu will swing into action, relieving her husband's incredible anxiety?

Desert Yeti

Can you imagine spiritual acid reflux? Poor guy.

SuperiorFreak

Yeah, the magistrate needs a raise. Or maybe a vacation? Hard to tell tbh.

Havefeith

Poor magistrate... but I can't help but laugh at his reaction.

Dirk Gent Lee

lol what an ending. Also, any chance Nezan becomes a subordinate spirit for Howling Mountains? Esp if she can pull the remnants of his boo, idk that sounded like more of a spirit beast only option.

Angel

Perhaps TLM’s stomach hurts so much when dealing with cultivators because his dantian wants to ignite but he subconsciously refuses to allow it because he’s so terrified of/traumatized by cultivators? His wife was nearly killed by a demonic cultivator, after all. Poor guy.

James Faulkner

Poor magistrate 😂

Angela Roberts

Oath, her oath dang it!

Angela Roberts

'Can you say that again? What!" Poor Magistrate, and his stomach. Shenshe's path was perfect. Acknowledging the hurt and offering a way forward. Cannot wait for the CSS & Co to meet TLM and the Inquisitor. This should good!

mag28

Does TLM even know who Shen Yu is? Or does he just think he is jins grandfather

Max E Malekzadeh

Poor TLM! He doesn't deserve this lol

Npad11111

Why do I feel like this is canon. Haha... This must be true, ain't no way gramps don't notice. Lol

Lanter

Here it is! The biggest moment I've been looking forward to after the whole incident, TLM'S REACTION! Shen Yu going "Yep, they're *all* coming here" while Jin is just "i'm sorry" and bowing in the background hahahaha 🤣 I wonder if anyone else from the CSS is like Lu Ri. Didn't he dig around TLM before going "Wow, he's just like the ideal magistrate as written in the founder's writings! 🤩" I wanna see him surrounded and admired by badass cultivators while screaming inside 😅

Npad11111

Nah, more like this I believe. Lol. https://youtube.com/shorts/Wq24ebd8Fng?si=rsZPX4tSzHwFcZCr

Longhaul

The ACTUAL protagonist of our story! Lol

Antony Claughton

Oh yeah, we definitely need another POV from the auditor on what has been happenning!

Daimah

I totally forgot about the auditor

Antony Claughton

I get a kick out every time the Shenhe thinks of Rou as a cloudy mountain sect elder. I also love it every time the lord magistrate is involved!

Kasinki

Nothing easy was for the Magistrate as ever. Thanks for the chapter CF!

ENK

If the big shots that are coming will meet the Lord Magistrate, I only pray that the imperial auditor gets involved in some manner. Hilarity will ensue.

Fullmetal

RIP Lord Magistrate

Aki_Iokua18

Sons of Gondor, of Rohan, my brothers, I see in your eyes the same fear that would take the heart of me. A day may come when the courage of men fails, when we forsake our friends and break all bonds of fellowship, but it is not this day! An hour of wolves and shattered shields, when the age of men comes crashing down, but it is not this day! This day we fight! By all that you hold dear on this good Earth, I bid you stand, Men of the West! Definitely got those kinds of vibes from her speech, very well done. So I guess the SMS are meeting with all the cavalry. Makes sense to get firsthand accounts. Anyway, here’s hoping Ri Zu and Mei’s combined knowledge can keep The Lord Magistrate’s stomach from imploding from all the stress and/or all the VIPs stay only a single night at most in Verdant Hill.

Dwayne Parker

Oh goodie, they’ll be around long enough to see the heavy hitters arrive.

Laura Hemly

This chapter may have fought you, CF, but you won in the end. What a moving scene with Shenhe returning to the first patriarch's vision and full oath! I wonder how well it will be received by the surviving portion of the Shrouded Mountain folks. And the poor Lord Magistrate's stomach! Meimei and Rizu need to make up their most powerful medicine for him!

Some guy

Lord magistrate: that’s ok :) Lord magistrate internally: fuuuuuuuuuuuuuu https://youtu.be/sJuUQPTkRgI?si=1B3tykfZov51AgWY

CringeWorthyStudios

By the divines, the Baka twins are going to get along so well here. Bailu will love Vajra and Wa Shi, and that’s not to mention what’ll happen when our favourite Japanese-analog water cultivator finds out about Jin’s thoughts on flow (and that he knows Japanese and Japanese food.)

TempestK

I love how Shen Yu is just "it is what it is" while Jin is basically kowtowing in apology because he knows *exactly* how his teacher is feeling right now.

CringeWorthyStudios

“The Lord Magistrate sat down heavily in his chair. Internally, he started screaming.” Relatable. 😅 Thanks for the chapter!

magobaltasar

I think that the Lord Magistrate needs to get a good antacid from Mei. It'd do him good.

Mad Max

So it's now a four-way battle royale between Jin's gig being up, Shenhe's departure, the Lord Magistrate's ulcers, and the Auditor's sanity.

ItWasIDIO!!

Lord Magistrate just know your student understands & is sorry for he cannot control the Unconquered ("cracked") Blade

The Cab #512

TY!!

Walter R.

This is Fridays chapter? So we get another one today😁😁😇

Randall Norman Pick

THERE's the TLM we love.

WarStrider72

On the seventh day of Christmas my true love gave to me seven Fa Ram meals, six nights of saunas, 5 golden oaths, four calling cards, three French hens, two different sects, and an Emperor's man! Oh the poor Lord Magistrate! Next time, blood will be spat out on both sides!

Kai

So, like. Do you think She Yu can feel TLM screaming? I like to think he can. And that he's so amused by it

Seiden Kyoukai

Poor Lord Stomachache. Every time that he thinks it can't get any worse...

Michael

Rest in peace TLM’s digestive tract.

K1NG_CHIMP

Oh boy, I'm so looking forward to everyone converging on Fa Ram! The meeting of the gluttonous dragons( bailu & Wa Shi) should be legendary!

Jazer Andrew Sotomayor

Thank you for the chapter

Ryan Kaiser

Love it

Michael W

Poor Lord Magistrate...

Sean Ulrich

Oh lord magistrate… it’s already too late to run

WarStrider72

Woot, thanks for the chapter boss!

Cranky Otter

Fight the good fight, we’ll hold out.


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