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IGIWS: FIRST DRAFT: Ch.296: Entering the Library.

🕑 Added 2024-11-05 04:03:03 +0000 UTC

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PaulMichaels

I should have put my notes in front of this chapter. I didn't like how forced the comedy was in the last chapter so this is a rewrite. I'm leaving the old chapter up for reference when Richard and George have this conversation again in the future. Sorry for the confusion

Marek Gwalt

TFTC

Micheal Kennedy

I The last two chapters have the same chapter number, I do believe. Just wanted to mention that.

PaulMichaels

So, one of my members brought up the point that the banter between George and Richard didn't feel right and I had to agree with them. I thought it would be go to have a comedic moment with George and it came at the expense of the story at this time and placed. So Richard and George will have that conversation letting in the future. Anyway hope you enjoy the rewrite. 😊


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