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IGIWS: FIRST DRAFT: Ch.322 Rya Still Can’t See the Signs.

🕑 Added 2025-01-18 09:55:09 +0000 UTC

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PaulMichaels

I can see where you are coming from. I like a lot of slice-of-life details and I have a big cast which definitely makes things seem slower. I have to think about it and let your comment stew a bit. You could be right, but I need to make sure I don't lose my voice in this story. Thx for the comment.

Givikap120

I think pacing of story became too slow. It takes like 5 chapters to get some noticeable movement in the main storyline

Micheal Kennedy

Fun chapter, thanks!

Katherine

Nice! Thank you for the chapter!

Marek Gwalt

TFTC


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