Patrefans
Timewalk from patreon
Timewalk patreon

Chapter 95: Guild Drama

🕑 Added 2024-05-21 14:00:12 +0000 UTC

Comments

Weebhunter452

Heh Magic mushrooms what’s next the world tree being cannabis?

Scyfe

No worries, I rather enjoy the story by the way. Pretty interesting story concept and I'm curious to see where it goes now that there isn't a convenient dungeon. This story has a good foundation and lots of interesting directions it can build in.

Adrian Secchia

Thanks for the feedback. Yes, if I had to do it over, I'd change the pacing of that subplot, making it resolve substantially quicker.

Adrian Secchia

most of the water in the dungeon is just normal - but the last chamber has the mana-purified water in a pool.

Mahetze

Great Chapter Did she miss some of the purified water on her way, or is it only in the pool in the last cave of the dungeon? Ali kinda had to beat the entire dungeon to reach that point, and the restrictions, on who is allowed to enter the dungeon, are in place that this should normaly* be impossible *for people who can't summon their own private army

Scyfe

Just subscribed and caught up. My biggest comment is I'm not really seeing how this guild sub plot can work out. The mind control bit has been dragged out for so long and has crossed the line so many times it's even bringing things like Calen giving this presentation into suspect. When they inevitably find out (not sure why he hasn't checked his journal in the last few chapters - it seems like this is subplot is being really dragged out) I don't see any reasonable way they all don't immediately cut ties with the guild, however the story keeps going and tying their party closer and closer to the guild. I'm a bit concerned a lot of this stuff is just going to be hand waved away

Gamingninja

Great chappie! Can't wait to see what Ali is going to end up doing with Mr Mimi there!

Karnevale

Aaaaah! A slime friend!

Adrian Secchia

The newbies who are left seem to have a lot of potential :)

Azgaroth

Thank for the chapter. It's here, that Ali smuggle the slime (domain holder and Dungeon creator), to her own dungeon and let's him live inside the lake..... 2-in-1 Dungeon for the WIN!!!!!!

Looting Pillager

Interesting chapter! I like the culling of dead weight here. Good riddance.


More Creators