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Iron Maidoll 1 - Sketch
🕑 Added 2022-07-20 11:38:17 +0000 UTCA thief wants to steal some magic items from a mage called "The Dollmaker".
Read from right to left.
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I want to do different things with sequence. Actually, it needs twice and more effort than usual to make this works. Because of that, I will continue the story later if I get in the mood again.
Because I'm not good at english. Please help me to edit the grammar or add more good line in link below. Any help would be appreciated.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M-afOwlcj6lW9kQ1ukdSoZ_OS2TAPnAQkTpRlkpLnAk/edit?usp=sharing
Thank you very much for the help.
Comments
Haryu
Thank you very much! :D I can learn more from it.
Andy Waltfeld
I've added italicized lines with some grammar cleanups and notes on context.
