Patrefans
Timewalk from patreon
Timewalk patreon

Chapter 101: The Wanderer

🕑 Added 2024-06-04 14:00:09 +0000 UTC

Comments

Adrian Secchia

God of Knowledge sounds epic :)

Adrian Secchia

There are a few references in the story already, but it could definitely be richer, I agree. I like the idea of using holidays and generally applying cultural context to deity worldbuilding.

Forrest Venable

if gods are going to have a material presence in the story, I would suggest giving them more presence leading up to this. For instance holidays are a great way of establishing this cultural context as well the passing of time. More specifically Vivian might instruct the members of the adventuring guild in various gods to make offerings to before delving a dungeon. Its a very dangerous activity and they can use all the help they can get. There might have been various shrines in the great library to gods relevant to its purpose. I could see Ali regularly making offerings to those gods purely out of piety as she grew up, with that influencing her insistence that Calen go out and do the trial. Malika might have a more adversarial relationship with the divine at the start, cursing them for her lot in life even as she asks her parents' gods for an out. Now having secured her future she might attempt to reconnect more properly but she doesn't remember a lot of it or was never told. More generally you might want to focus more on offerings than evangelism/reputation, which allows for another way of characters preparing for something difficult or to show that they felt something was a big deal.

Jacob Mariorenzi

Cool! I hope aliandra gets the patronage of a god of knowledge. Or perhaps nature? Or actually why not both?

Youri A.

Thanks for the chappie!

Looting Pillager

I love the chapters that shine a light on new parts of the world for us! Thank you!


More Creators