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Chapter 106: A Necromancer’s Deception

🕑 Added 2024-06-16 14:00:08 +0000 UTC

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S. R.

Completely agreed. I assumed at some point her grimoire would consolidate some of those existing chapters into the existing “armor” category or even a couple of the others into a “weapon” category. And excellent point; as if being a summoner isn’t already stellar. Enjoy your evening. And keep up the wonderful work!

Adrian Secchia

At this point in the story, the major limit is Grimoire chapters, Ali would need to sacrifice something to learn potions or gold. Yes, we could make a very strong argument that either of those might be far more useful than some of the things she has recorded right now, but she hasn't reached that conclusion herself. Out of story: I personally have no problem writing something like potion creation as a Grimoire imprint - I don't think it's any more overpowered than the ability to summon monsters or items. Especially considering you could just sell the items for money and then buy whatever you need. It should end up being roughly the same as making gold directly from an economic impact perspective.

S. R.

This may have been asked before, but is there a reason Ali’s penchant for creation hasn’t been extended to potions, or the Dal’mohran coins? At this point, the reoccurring issue of funds or wealth is expressed at least once every chapter or so, and the solution has yet to be addressed. All of the gradual relationship cultivation/networking in town/Malika’s business savviness could still occur alongside the idea that Ali can create wealth for the team. I’ve seen comments previously saying that the ability would be “too OP”, but that thinking seems a bit narrow. Limitations of being able to create the coins could be imposed organically simple by the nature of Myrrin’s Keep being a fledgeling nation. In addition, the added suspicion/scrutiny that the unknown source of the influx of wealth would bring upon the team/Ali would still serve to further your current plot tension with the cultural disconnect that has eroded the relationship dungeons had with the world’s races. A bit lengthy, but please know that regardless of the above, I enjoy the story immensely, from your exposition and writing style, to the character development and world building. The story is very much nothing short of amazing. Have a wonderful evening!


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