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Chapter 195: Demons

🕑 Added 2024-12-22 15:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Antony Claughton

Um, neither the hornets or spiders have any fire resistance or fire immunity. I assume that is an oversight as otherwise they would have been crisped getting from the rift to the mines exit.

Lijwent

It's a recurring problème on Patreon mobile, something makes some words break at random places for no reason (I saw it too) Maybe removing the word, saving and adding it back would fix it? Though that's annoying

Michael

I wonder what the demon analog to “ancient mistress” will be once Ali learns how to speak with her new minions.

Michael

Tftc. I was amused at the casual reference to a nap which was probably adventurer speak for “collapsed in exhaustion while the rest of the party stood watches, ready to wake Ali up at the first sign of an attempt to flank the defensive line.”

Adrian Secchia

for the record, you're not the only person seeing this.

Adrian Secchia

Huh, that's odd - I don't see that at all. Are you using the app by any chance?

Tenebrous Savant (Metatron)

That last bit for Malika really made this chapter outstanding. Thank you.

Fredrik Rikheim

Tyftc. Finaly Malika is rid of that titler that was forced on her.

Sjonzy

"...most Ambush classes specialized in a small number...". It is just before the Critical Bleed skill read through.

Danel4d

Thanks for the chapter!

Danel4d

If I remember correctly, we first saw them about to fight the wolves, then we saw them part way through the other fight and struggling. I can understand how the series of events would happen, and maybe it’ll be explained the next time Ali is at the guild.

Chyre

@Timewalk Was it intended for the bronze-rankers to switch bosses? In Demon Hunter, they were shown to be trying to fight the Goblin Shaman / Ooze combo, but now they've just defeated the Timber Wolf. It's not really a problem - the text still reads okay - but it strikes me as the kind of thing that might be an editorial oversight. I wouldn't try to change it for now (or ever, really, prior to finishing the book), but it might be something to make a note of for later, in case you're ever cleaning things up for publication on Amazon.

HornboozeWFG

Clarence is the boy also it seems like there is going to be multiple advancements on Ali's end soon, regarding her minions as she see various amount of status sheets.... Hopefully there can be an copy and paste feature along with editing with her runic script skill. I also think with that with the Rift warden title this will allow for certain skill evolutions to class evolutions as well. might be able to put it on her creatures as well

Allubällchen

The specialized is split bad on the mobile app

Allubällchen

She studied a few of its support skills. As she had learned from Calen, most Ambush classes specialized in a small number of big attacks, stacking

Chyre

Clarence reminds me of a pet cat. Except with words and paper.

InLucidReverie

Split at z

InLucidReverie

> most Ambush classes speciali zed in a small number of big attacks

Adrian Secchia

I'm not seeing a bad break - can you quote a little more of the sentence so I can find it?

Ulsar

tyfc

Karnevale

Good for you, Malika! You deserve it!

Gecko

fyi specialied "d" is splite across the next line


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