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Chapter 216: Kir’mogan

🕑 Added 2025-02-04 15:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Tim Burget

> The domain mana surged again, and the boss unleashed a ground-crushing strike that tore into Mato. > “I can’t keep Mato healed,” she told him. “That Mortal Wounds refuses to drop. I think the boss’s biggest strike is refreshing it.” It had to be a domain-empowered ability. I'm confused. If the domain-empowered ability is refreshing Mortal Wounds, shouldn't the strike from the first quote have refreshed Mortal Wounds after Mato used Last Stand, forcing Last Stand to run out first? > “I can’t read it,” Ali said. Domain magic was one thing, but Kir’mogan’s skill had to be a martial ability. I thought you said Kir'mogan's biggest strike was domain-empowered earlier. > Ali lowered herself to the ground to free up her barrier magic and it took a few moments until she felt the domain mana surge. Yeah, it is. Is the issue that Ali can't tell which of the domain-empowered strikes refresh Mortal Wounds? If so, that could be a bit clearer.

Alexix

Thank you for the meal. Happy to see Gara survived.

StraylightGrove

Also the semi-paradox of crushing blows (blunt force usually) causing gashes (I know it’s his claws he using tho) is a bit off. Personal preference, don’t feel obligated to change it

Tarrim

There is a party around her level down a member

zimmergage

Seeing her people dying like that, the trauma, good thing she's in good company.

Chyre

Happens to the best of us ;-)

Roberto Monte

A Troll Blood Shaman with the experience to be a battery charge for the dead and the torture. Probably powerful development to be seeing. Finally a 5th member? The problem is the low lvl, only 12.

Adrian Secchia

Yep, this is a good catch, thanks!

Adrian Secchia

Yike, how did I miss that?

BenjiVoid

> As he barreled past the shaman and warrior minions, he lashed out in retaliation, instant crushing strikes of his claws inflicting devastating gashes I think this should start with something like "as the shaman's tried to barrel past him" right? The retaliation only triggers when they try to leave, not when he passes by them? It's kind of the same thing here, but it confused me at first, and if they were trying to attack him it shouldn't trigger.

Chyre

Minor continuity error: > “Now, Ali!” Calen yelled. > “Now, Ali!” Malika yelled. When the boss fight is shown from Mato's perspective, it's Calen who yells for Ali to block the strike with her barrier. When shown from Ali's perspective, it's Malika who does that.

HornboozeWFG

New party memeber and new imprints...which will never see the light of day....neat


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