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Chapter 222: Mushroom Snacks

🕑 Added 2025-02-18 15:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Tim Burget

> “You’re just going to have to make a call each time – if we need a tank, free one of your drakes or Malika if we need damage, Malika or me, as needed,” he said. Malika if -> Malika. If > She took a step backward, surprised to find her body substantial and real, with color flooding her skin. Did her body appear gray in the Spirit Realm last chapter? I don't think it called her body out as being gray specifically, but the rest of the narration seemed to imply it was.

Alexix

Thank you for the meal!

Chyre

No problem!

Adrian Secchia

Thanks for catching this. I changed it to have them discuss scouting after dinner, so he can stick around for the scene as you suggested.

Chyre

Minor continuity error here: Seeing that Malika and Calen were absorbed in their own projects, she clapped her hands sharply. “Class! Pay attention, please!” Calen has just left to go scouting. He wouldn't be in the camp at all. This also matters later: “Let’s head out,” Calen said. He turned to Gara and in broken Trollish, he asked, “Is it this right way?” Pointing to a narrow and twisting trail that wound tightly around the giant trunks and spreading roots of the trees. He learned Trollish from the cooking session. So maybe just have Calen take a break while they cook, rather than scouting? In any case, thanks for the chapter!

Ulsar

tyfc

Drakenclaw

Thanks for the chapter. "She had to halt their progress several times to deconstruct trees around the tighter bends just to allow them passage." Ummmm.... Minion Teleport? Just switch them through it?

Mahetze

If Ali can controll her minions all the way back in her own domain, shouldn't she use that to report in what happened so far / warn e.g. her auntbor vivian about the fall of the troll kingdom so they can call the archmages aso Her aunt probably knows draconian so she could just instruct one of her Kobold minions to tell her, or as alternative use a goblin minion to talk to havoc, one of her beast minions to talk to the beast tamer girl (assuming she has the same skill as mato) aso

Azgaroth

Thank for the chapter. I wonder with all that Spirit Realm stuff, could Ali set up a Second Dungeon??? Just in the Spirit Realm instead... And if this possible what would be the bonus and effect of having two Dungeon at the "same place"; just in two Realm??? (For me Ali/ the Dungeon will learn how to propagate/traverse Realm, earning more Mana, and space for Boss across the Realm, and perhaps Ali could create some sort of switch, to change Realm, and experience the Dungeon differently....)

Stephen Jobbs The Heel Who Always Loses

Thanks for the chapter. It's always a pleasure


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