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Chapter 382: He Rides Upon a Pale Horse

🕑 Added 2025-08-04 14:00:14 +0000 UTC

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AuraMaster

Where the fuck is Clarence in all of this??

Stephanie Washburn

"“Annoying pest! Just like your mother,” the Lich spat, unintentionally triggering a surge of pride in Ali’s heart. But he continued with ice-cold anger lacing his unnatural intonation, “And like her, you will surely perish.”" Did Nevyn Eld forget his lines? He's got a lot more personal things to say than this

Mull16

That would have been a good idea but tbf Im willing to chalk that up to panic I didn't think of it either.

Sce7tm

*Edited because i wanted to start off by saying thanks for the chapter and im excited by the new arc of Ali presumably establishing a beachhead in the demon realm from which to counter attack (felt my previous comment came across as too critical).* I feel like this may have benefitted from being drawn out over a few chapters. It's kinda unsatisfying when a significant aspect of the story is expanding and building a cool/strong homebase, only for it to be taken without apparent effort in a single chapter. I get that it's to establish the overwhelming power of the the big bad, but it feels like Alis dungeon just keeps getting Worfed (I.e. while meant to be scary/powerful, seems to be exclusively shown getting immediately taken down by the new bad guy to establish them as a threat).

Daniel Zelada

This seems like where the story was wanting to go before the previous retcon. The blind lich shows up after the last raid, everyone escapes but the gate is left open, Lira dies. You could take this chapter and plop it right at the end of the last raid and it wouldn't feel that out of place. The story had to jump through a bit of a hoop to get things in place, the gate was not necessary for the raid of a single team, but it was necessary so the lich could follow Ali back.

Lacika02

Is there a reason she did not use the time stop+deconstruction combo? Or I just dont see why that wouldnt work?

Dero_Dore

What mistake here?

sillymel

Welp. RIP Aunt Lira. Well, it certainly isn't resting or "in peace" right now, but hopefully they can fix that. I mean, they're gonna have to for Ali to survive.

Will-o'- the-Wisp

Why is the protagonist suddenly lost most of her brain cells in the last couple chapters? She keeps making the same mistakes over and over again.

NeverendingMixUp

.... Damn.


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