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Chapter 383: Fleeing Through an Angry Forest

🕑 Added 2025-08-04 14:05:01 +0000 UTC

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Froyo Baggins

I honestly don't understand why she didn't time stop to destroy the gate. Other than that, this isn't so bad.

Mateusz Lokś

No, you're not the only one thinking there... I also have a lack of feeling any progress. One step forward and 100 steps back...

noVa

Honestly this is it for me I think.. this novel started out exceptionally well, but got progressively more inconsistent the longer it went on, the same mistakes were made over and over again, it’s like the cast forgets the lessons they were supposed to learn in just the next chapter and we end up in a loop. A lot of content is forced and doesn’t make sense. And yes I know Nevyn eld is portrayed to be super op and basically controls the world, but the pacing of the story got to a point where I don’t enjoy reading it any more. I kinda expected the story to go a different way as well, with her dungeon building the bastion of this world to defend against the undead and rebuild or whatever, but with them constantly getting steamrolled and all they’ve built destroyed over and over does not make for an engaging read. Well maybe that’s the way it will go but the potential I’ve personally seen in the early chapters got lost along the way, at least from my perspective. I’m really sorry if this honest critique ends up hurting you, just know that I wish you the best. might just be my ramblings so don’t take it too seriously, it was a fun read anyways! cheers to you all.

Alex V

I feel like this "death" happened too early in the story. There was no meaningful progression made in the last 20 chapters; heroes are still majorly fucked, and they just cleared 1 dungeon. So this setback felt like a meme "aw shit, here we go again". Now they have lost another ally, and the dungeon of knowledge will be destroyed by rampaging monsters and the Lich, but it's not even the end of this encounter. At the same time, heroes from the Daria or Torion kingdom are absent from the story. They couldn't all be that bad/evil/corrupt, so they just want to join the Lich. Where the fuck are they? This was a nice story that I read for fun, and now it's just a fanfiction about a "punching bag" main hero that cannot accomplish shit or be prepared. This "dungeon invasion" from a flower pot felt cheap, and I don't see a good reason for it.

Mateusz Lokś

So this is how the story ends? Sorry if I sound a bit whiny – I genuinely enjoy reading this series and have been following it for a long time. I like it so much that even when I see the characters acting suicidally or recklessly, I grit my teeth and keep going. Just to give an example: dozens of times our group of heroes should’ve backed off, taken a breather, or approached the situation more carefully – instead of constantly walking the razor’s edge of death, relying on blind luck and hoping “maybe we won’t all die.” In many cases (not all, but very often), they simply could’ve retreated. Plot armor is definitely a thing here. Most of the time, it’s tolerable – but this chapter? It honestly feels like “Okay, I’m tired of writing this story, so I’ll just kill everyone off.” Unless there’s some ridiculous plot twist coming, it seems like the story could end in the next 2–5 chapters. Another thing: because I’m so invested in the story, I’ve been doing my best to ignore the nonsensical power levels of the characters and the world around them. The protagonists level up too fast, their gear is too weak, and they somehow defeat enemies that should vastly outmatch them. But once these enemies become allies or drop loot? That loot suddenly becomes overpowered. Really? Just a moment ago it was average, and now in the hands of the main cast it’s OP? Or take the world’s scaling. Trolls are supposedly insanely strong and long-lived, right? And even after their city gets turned into a dungeon – making them even stronger – they get trashed by the first random party that barely hits Gold rank. Weren’t they portrayed as one of the world’s mightiest forces? Meanwhile, the human kingdom has several Platinum-ranked teams that could apparently do the same thing effortlessly. So what, the human kingdom could conquer the continent – maybe even the whole world – if they felt like it? That kind of logic just doesn’t add up. And it’s always the same: the dungeon or challenge our party faces is perfectly tailored to their level and abilities. It’s never something too weak (so we could see how much they’ve grown), like revisiting an early zone in an RPG with a high-level character. And it’s almost never too strong either. The only exceptions I can think of are that infernal rift and maybe the rotten dungeon near Nali’s... That’s two cases in how many chapters? Yes, I’m complaining a lot – and honestly, I could go on. I haven’t even covered everything on my mind. I’m probably forgetting some things or skipping over others to avoid making this comment even longer. I’m not claiming I’m right about everything, but I think I have some valid points... And I’m writing this because the last two chapters hit me hard. The losses in the previous chapter were way too much, and this one feels like there’s no way out. Like the end is inevitable – unless, of course, some miracle happens. Still, I truly wish the author all the best, and I’m only writing all this because I genuinely care about this story. But damn... this is getting painful. Today, for the first time, I seriously considered dropping the series. I’ve done it before with other stories – when the author started pulling logic-breaking stunts just to let the characters escape impossible, absurd situations with no real way out. You know the kind: “Sure, I’m only level 25, I’ve used up all my items, and I’ve only taken 1% of the boss’s HP – but I’m sure I’ll manage somehow!” Ugh... I really hate that kind of nonsense.

Dylan McConnell

Others have already expressed this, but I'm getting frustrated with the lack of progression. Its like a rubber band of "something advances" followed by "just kidding it doesn't matter"

Mull16

I don't really understand how the rift closed. I thought it might be because the mana eater took all the mana so there was nothing to sustain it but the raid boss at the other rift was a mana eater as well and that rift was fine staying open.

Chyre

Agreed. The lich is effectively the Illuminati. He rules the world, you just don't know that he rules the world, because he does it behind the scenes.

Matthew

I think what everyone who's upset about the various governments not getting involved yet need to realize is that the lich has had a LONG time to set things up how he wants them and he has infiltrated likely every institution that might either be a threat or be useful to him. He had/has agents in the government and town watch of Myrin's Keep, a middle of nowhere worthless town. His agent in the one of the largest organizations fighting against him was the LEADER of that organization. The troll nations fell like dominos in large part to having been massively infiltrated by his people. Everything from the layout of borders to the way laws are written and enforced has been shaped by him and his agents and his agents agents for thousands of years. Even all the anti dungeon laws and sentiment are likely directly because of him. A powerful enough dungeon, especially a sentient one, seems to be one of the few threats to him. Especially if they can use their truly insane abilities and powers to help equip and level up their allies. So he has all his dungeons behave in ways that are evil and/or untrustworthy, and wipes out any competing dungeons that might not be so shitty, and before long it doesn't even matter if he misses any wild dungeons, nobody will ever trust them anyway. All of this is a very long way of saying that even if most of the people in an organization would help if they knew what was actually going on, be that a nation, a city, another adventures guild, an unaligned fighting force like the pathfinders, or whatever. There are almost definitely laws/rules and high ranking members actively making that harder or impossible. Meaning going and helping a Dirty, Evil, FUCKING Dungeon (read in the voice of Goblin Slayer (abridged) when talking about goblins) is also likely to set off something akin to a civil war or mass arrests for things like desertion or treason.

Choronach

I agree with you but we're readers. To be fair to them... It's the responsibility of their government (their's is a shitty one alright). There's not supposed to be the ones responsible for a world ending threat. But! I agree that they're looking for troubles by putting themselves in the light. And by that, it's Ali that has shitty reactions : she again and again hide her PTSD by never ending work and side quests but don't hesitate to put herself in the way of the Blind Beach a each occasion possible and putting everyone at risk. She's still a child with trouble and a some point, she will have to face her fear, fix her mental health and grow up. Only then I think, will they be able to really plan. Right now, everyone is just riding the Ali's train sadly. And the worst is that the Blind Beach has probably gotten what is was looking for 3 000 years ago and don't need her bloodline and knowledge like he needed her mothers sadly

CherMi

They've been in this cycle of victory and defeat for a while, except each defeat is significant, while victory is small and unsatisfying in comparison. And after each victory you just know that next defeat is looming now, so it's harder to enjoy the in-between chapters. For me, it's making it unsatisfying and frustrating to read the scheduled deafeat chapters and the inevitable comeback is only expected, with a dose of plot armor in there. Bonus points when the defeat happens because characters didn't plan for (gasp) their enemy attacking them.

Rip Woodham

Why didn't they plan for this? They couldn't imagine the Lich would target them, really??? If they plan, they get to think about everything they can imagine beforehand and develop protocols for it. Protocols are useful because they don't have to think about what to do THEN in that moment of panic like how Ali took too long to realize what was going on and then everyone split up leaving Ali to her own devices. Couldn't they have developed an alarm? They couldn't imagine the need after they were part of the Troll and Elf kingdom falling the same way, and they then go on to house the refugees and mount a resistance and base of operations! No protocol would of had anything going the way it did in this chapter. Lira just bought Ali a few seconds with her life and gave the Lich a powerful tool to further turn the tide against them. A few seconds that shouldn't have been necessary if she knew Lyra had been informed, and she wouldn't have even been in that situation in the first place since no protocol would leave Ali alone against the Lich. It's just so frustrating I can't even be sad.

Choronach

Ali's isn't dead so no one can do anything to the shrine. But her domain must be restricted to the immediate vicinity of her shrine I guess

Choronach

That got my heart pumping! That's the Mother of All Curveballs! And I'm so fucking sad for Aunt Lyra. They'll obviously power up a little but hoping against hope that they'll finally stop fighting alone and start forcibly rallying the Reste of the word, the rulers of the kingdoms are the most useless fuckers I've ever read!

Alex Woolfson

I ain't gonna lie, those last 2 chapters feel like a nightmare. It is becoming at the same time too predictable and too outlandish that they cant progress without Nevyn Eld setting them back while getting more powerful. Each time they gain momentum, he is there. It's hard to explain why but this seemingly neverending cycle of the same setback is starting to wear on me.

Karnevale

Big yikes! Excited to see how this turns out!

Sce7tm

Wait how were the mines still part of Ali's domain? Her domain spreads from her altar throught the library into the mines. If the library was taken over by undead Larisa's dungeon then the mines should have been cut off from her domain. I'm pretty sure something similar happened way back when the dungeon was first attacked by the guard/the ice dude.

The one Sith to rule them all

Actually conter srgument: considering that solid barier did hold him back, and some skills pass level differences like her interrupt, if they gathered all evolved fighters in the city they might have beat him, He is a necromancer, not a 1v everyone champion

Scyfe

Yea, this is why I just don't find the lich a compelling villian. The power level is just too disparate to be interesting. It's always either he is choosing not to deal with them or someone's going to predictably die.


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