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🕑 Added 2021-01-24 22:02:20 +0000 UTCWait...you didn't disinfect your hands!
My dear readers, a reminder - please help me correct any English spelling/semantic text mistakes if you see any. I'd be grateful :)
Comments
Toby
massive owo moment
Bre Indigo
Oh no he said I'd take better care of you and I started to cry????? He probably meant it in a horny way but all I was thinking of is Herz getting love from Lunge and Lunge being a lot less angsty because he got the attention he wanted from Herz.
Tee
Oh my gosh so cuuuute I'm so ready for the horny ποΈπποΈ
Milk Assassin
thanks! changed it! Sometimes I feel it myself that something's wrong but I can't tell what :) that's why I need readers like you.
Let's chill my dudes
Hello! English reader here! The only thing I would change is taking out the second βevenβ in the first panel dialogue. Having two is a little bit clunky. But otherwise itβs perfect! Iβm so excited to see more of this bonus comic!