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Dethroned - 178 to 196 (THE END!)
🕑 Added 2023-07-12 09:54:35 +0000 UTCAHHH!!! It's finally over!
I hope you all enjoy it!
Downloads and whatnot will be provided at the end of the month.
Next up, Haley's Secret!
Thank you, as always, for your amazing support!
Comments
ktc
Re-read the start, she was quite awful prior to Quin and Liz. She did seem to get particularly nasty after their arrival though, as her unpleasant behavior became singularly focused. The fact that she is now grotesque to all but the most fervent breast and giantess fetishists *cough* I think got to her, as well as the clear loss of control of her own libido. More like she was humbled than a drastic shift in personality. A proper reaction to a body altering goddess that's angry.
Beetlebomb
Thanks, Ktc. I'm glad it was enjoyable for you :)
Beetlebomb
My pleasure :) I need to make them shorter in the future, for sure. It's my curse.
ktc
It felt less like her personality changed and more that she recognized she had taken it too far imo. She clearly wasn't always a terrible person, as she only started showing her particularly nasty behavior once Quinn came onto the scene and made her Queen Bee Sorority status feel threatened. Liz being Quins friend, small, and petite at the time became a natural target for her own insecurities.
JacobWSX
Love the ending.
JacobWSX
I love how enormous Danielleโs breast grew at the end, and that her personality completely changed.
JacobWSX
Yet again Beetle, you fail to disappoint. Great work my friend.
ktc
Liz pleading to spare her really sealed the transition of power. A tale of compassion, and boobies. Lots of boobies.
Cl.AI.re Miyamoto
It's been long journey for a short story. Thank you.
