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VR360 "Takeout" featuring Jennifer Rose

🕑 Added 2019-11-06 15:33:55 +0000 UTC
VR360 "Takeout" featuring Jennifer Rose

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godqueen

Thank you for the thoughtful feedback DotNet! It's funny you mentioned the inside of the mouth sounds, because I have been trying to think of some creative ways to to translate that sort of terror/chaos, but haven't been able to find anything that sounded too great (if you have any ideas, feel free to suggest!). Most things I was trying felt kinda ridiculous and unreal/cartoonish, so I wound up taking em out and going the simpler route. I went back and forth on whether or not I should even include extra mouth sounds or just fading the screen to black (because I know that those moments definitely aren't doing the gravity of the situation justice)...however, it felt too abrupt to have nothing there at the same time. I think what also happened with this clip is that I just simply ran out of time to re-edit and re-render the clip a few more times, so rather than waiting another month to release it, I figured the degree of difference probably wouldn't warrant the extra month's wait if that makes sense haha. In general, I'd like to really spend a few days just gathering new sound fx, because I think while the things I had were working when I began this project, I could certainly use new potentials (although it's tough finding good ones that are free to use, but not impossible!). Anyways, I really appreciate you taking the time to write this up. It definitely helps to get feedback, especially when some of my concerns are echoed or conversely, it is pointed out when I'm being a little too hard on myself. So thank you!

DotNet

I've only had time to watch this outside of VR so far, but I kinda love what I see and hear! The extra sounds are great. I'm not crazy about booms (I think they're a bit over the top) but I know there is an audience that is always clamouring for them, so that's fine. Jen is great, I love casual situations like this. I really appreciated the editing, how Jen was finishing up the action on the previous POV when it switched to the next. Good continuity! The being eaten with a chip thing was a fun surprise. Like the extra detail of adding crunching sounds to those. Speaking of sounds, the only weak point for me was the sounds in mouth. Only a faint swallowing sound. I feel like, from a POV perspective, being rolled around in a mouth and swallowed should be the loudest craziest thing. And just doing a tiny gulp, is kinda like lighting a firework and having it just go "pfffrt" It was seriously such a better video than you lead it on to be though :) Thank you for releasing it!


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