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Black Widow: Her Own Game (Part 2)

🕑 Added 2020-12-17 00:14:56 +0000 UTC

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Thanks! That's the fun stuff, I think :p

Rodimus903

Still awesome and another level of conflict that could be explored. I really enjoy the way you put thought into the conflict, be it physical, magical, emotional or psychological. It's awsome.

Rodimus903

and that could be fun, especially if the turn the cruelty they learned from the villain back on them.

Rodimus903

Addicted huh? Interesting, but since I am something of a contrarian I think anyone can overcome it if starved of it enough. Is it possible we could see a heroine escape and plan a ryona revenge on the villain. They will certainly have cause.

OOOOH, I actually REALLY like Elektra for Lady Viper! I'd be picturing Jennifer Garner Elektra in the red silk, as I'm one of the only people in the world who liked that version :p. I could probably make that happen at some point!

Rodimus903

Elektra could work very well with her. You could also use Psylock or X 23. Perhaps a 3 part story starting with Elektra and then adding in the other two. The skill sets of these three characters are similar to Black Widow but I think they would force Viper to overcome additional difficulties could make a great story.

Rodimus903

I would also like to see Viper perhaps take on a different character in the Marvel verse! Viper has a lot of potential as multiple character antagonist!

Rodimus903

I bet for the win and came all so close. Great story and I liked the strategic and tactical back and forth of the fight. Great stuff. I do have one question though, there was no telegraphing of Viper disappearing powers. Are we going to get a prequel with the Invisible Woman where she loses and Viper poorly copies her powers to explain the ability?

I did have fun with the dart bit :p. Would you prefer I had more stuff with her as a doll?

Jean

Absolutely love it! It's interesting how Black Widows almost makes a comeback but then gets embarrassed by Viper using her last shot against herself. Makes it even more humiliating and the contrast between her tough self and the doll she turns into is very satisfying.

What do you consider the "submission" portion?

Nice. Personally feel the "defeat" portion got too much of the time and the "submission" portion too little, but I'm still sated by a delicious damsel downed.


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