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🕑 Added 2021-08-03 23:27:53 +0000 UTC

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Rodimus, Mitch, Nick, APerson, Saikuzu, I really appreciate ya'll taking the time to offer such thoughtful comments. It helps me to get a better idea of what ya'll want! Since the race is so close, I think what I'll do is stagger the releases like I've been doing, alternating between a straight to the action story and a more longform story. Sound good?

Rodimus903

I think the build up is important because it sets the scene and lays out the stakes, which are not always the same from story to story. However, once in awhile a straight to the action story would be a nice change of pace.

Mitch Thatcher

I feel that some build up is good, helps set the scene and stuff. But I won't lie I am all for getting to the good stuff sooner.

Nick Loo

I would not mind you trying a story where you start with the good stuff first.

Maybe a little build up but not as much as there is. If 2/3rds of part 1 was build up and then you got some juicy stuff at the end and part 2 was effectively what part 3 is now then I think that'd be a good compromise.

Obibi

I think that the buildup is important, it just doesn't have the same flavor without it. If it's just straight to the action, it's basically a copy paste with just the names changing each time imo, I really like the time you take to set the mood and the characters mindset 😊 I also get that people might prefer more action/less build up, you can maybe try to reduce it a bit (not a significant part but a bit) and see what it gives? Thanks for your work as always!