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Spooktober Artwork Sketch Complete!
🕑 Added 2021-10-13 15:49:56 +0000 UTCHeyo! I know I normally share WIPS on the fortnightly update (which'll still be happening on saturday) but i've just finished the sketch for the spooktober monthly artwork and boy have i scope-creeped :P
I've cheekily swapped my OC Mesma in as the subject, returning from her role in the January Monthly art :)
So, what do you think? Hopefully it reads okay!
Comments
Something Tanuki
Oh yeah, this flows way better imo!
Miltonholmes
It's not just you, you make a valid point! I think i've rectified it with dialogue: https://sta.sh/0g0g95l81w1
Something Tanuki
Might just be me but I got a bit lost between panels 2/3? Maybe if the second panel showed the tape halfway inserted into the machine, or a finger on a play button? I might be overthinking it, idk. The tf is awesome :D fun face progression and very lovely final panel
