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Chapter 512 – Internal
🕑 Added 2025-11-11 07:01:01 +0000 UTCLacking enough information to determine with any certainty what exactly was making the sailors ill, Micky decided to let the situation unfold, and to deal with everything as it came.
Ignoring the coughing men, he took a moment to bask in the warm sunlight, and to take a few deep breaths of the cool, salty breeze, appreciating his leisurely stroll along the coast. His host didn’t know where exactly their destination was, but according to the others there was still some ground left to cover.
For Marnok and his crewmates, this island might very well be a deathtrap, but for Micky, it was just the beautiful setting for another of his many adventures – one of the more relaxing ones too.
‘I should still try to get the new spell down before we enter the jungle,’ he reminded himself.
The concealment rune might save Marnok’s life later. While Micky wasn’t above enjoying his time here, he wasn’t going to willingly sabotage his new buddy’s survival prospects out of laziness or nonchalance.
He turned his attention back to the half-formed enchantment inside his host’s core. As difficult as it was to control one’s mana internally, Micky was more than a little skilled at doing precisely that. His elemental body on Remior had to do something similar every time he wanted to shift his ice mana between its three states, and that was without taking into account all the other permutations of pre-casting that he could apply in battle.
On top of that, drawing a single rune was pretty much the simplest expression of magiscript possible, even without his spectral trait helping him. With it, shaping the air mana into the circular symbol was more than manageable.
‘Drawing the rune isn’t the problem,’ he noted. ‘The biggest issue is the rest of the mana messing the enchantment up.’
Mana cores contained a mage’s entire reserves, holding enough power to conjure up some pretty violent spells even as early as Yellow – let alone the higher grades. And all of that energy was normally stored inside a volume no larger than a strawberry. Consequently, even the slightest push could cause the mana to thrash wildly inside the organ.
This was why pre-casting was so difficult to master in the first place – manipulating the mana with any finesse required a gentle touch. Things were still simple when it came to more straightforward transformations like rotations or splitting the flow into multiple parts, but even the most basic runes had a relatively intricate shape.
Worse still, while Micky’s trait helped him control the mana tied to the enchantment, it had nothing to say about the rest of his reserves. Then again, that was only to be expected, given its description.
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· [Scribing] – Boosts one’s proclivity in expressing meaning onto any written medium.
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Thankfully, Scribing was rather lax when determining what counted as a “written medium”, having allowed Micky to do all sorts of interesting things with it in the past. However, the definition didn’t seem to extend to indirect help – it could force the mana into the correct shape, but it couldn’t prevent a separate stream of mana from distorting it.
‘It’s ridiculous that I thought I wouldn’t have to worry about the environment disturbing the enchantments…’ he lamented, the corner of his host’s lips curling into a bitter frown. ‘There’s no worse environment than the interior of a mana core!’
There was a silver lining, however. Micky had once again discovered how profound the Vault’s runecrafting language was. The circular runes fit neatly inside the spherical core, making use of every square millimetre of its cross-section. Had he used any other language, he would have had to make the runes smaller to make them fit, weakening their effects and wasting space.
He was pretty sure that it was just a coincidence. He didn’t think that Metatron knew about pre-casting, and he sure hoped that the titan hadn’t even considered the possibility of elevating Circulation into an artificial promotion.
‘As long as Tlaloc and Leo keep their mouths shut about the Dance, it would be too great a leap of logic.’
Then again, it was entirely possible that Micky’s friends had already let the information slip. Perhaps, he shouldn’t be underestimating Metatron’s ingenuity either.
Whether the god had realized it or not, he already had access to many of the tools that Micky was planning to use in his project. The only ones that he might lack were the spectral traits and the alchemic principles, but Metatron could still potentially find workarounds.
‘Well, there’s nothing I can do about it now. Even if he gets there before I do, it won’t affect me immediately. As long as I can become a god, I’ll be able to deal with him one day.’
Either way, Micky already knew the titan’s main reasons for building his entire runecrafting language on circular shapes, and they had nothing to do with mana cores. It made the enchantments simpler to draw and easier to stack together – both things that Micky had grown to greatly appreciate after years of experience in the field.
Regardless of Metatron’s motivations, Micky had to admit that the runes were practically perfect for what he wanted to do. Even if he stopped holding the enchantments in place, they would be able to keep spinning inside the core with no obstruction.
‘Wait… Spinning? That could work!’ he thought, causing his host’s heart to skip a beat.
Micky had been trying way too hard to keep the runes still, but that only made it more difficult for them to weather the violent flows of mana inside the organ. What if he stopped resisting and just allowed the symbols to rotate freely?
Deciding to give that a shot, he repaired the damaged enchantment once more, this time letting go of the circle’s circumference. Like a flicked coin, the rune began revolving rapidly, falling apart within mere seconds. This was precisely what Micky had feared would happen, though he keenly noticed that the symbol had survived a little longer than his previous attempts.
Seeing that his latest idea had merit, he repeated his actions, adjusting his mindset slightly. He couldn’t afford to let go of the rune entirely, or it would crumble on the spot. He still had to put some effort into keeping it intact, though he should probably avoid squeezing it as tightly.
‘Its shape has to stay fixed, but its angular momentum and orientation don’t really matter.’
The second attempt went a little better, the rune lasting for over five seconds before getting ripped apart. Thankfully, the wind crashing against it didn’t apply as much pressure when Micky allowed the symbol to move freely, though a new problem soon presented itself.
Focusing on the enchantment was difficult. It revolved dozens – if not hundreds – of times per second, and it did so randomly, in all three dimensions.
Micky was only able to hold on to the rune for a while due to his trait. Unlike the conscious part of his mind that struggled to keep track of the construct, the instincts granted to him by Scribing didn’t seem to care about whether the symbol was upside-down, flipped horizontally, or spinning.
Leaning into that feeling, Micky stopped trying to sense the rune directly. Ignoring the feeling in his host’s chest entirely, he allowed a static picture of the concealment rune to form in his mind – a perfect representation of the enchantment inside his core, stripped of the movements.
He could still feel how the symbol was being affected by its surroundings, but he had essentially aligned his thoughts with the rune’s frame of reference. He experienced the erratic air mana slamming into the construct as a series of violent gales, hitting it from every direction in an attempt to tear it down.
‘They feel weaker than before though,’ he realized, suppressing the urge to grin.
Ten seconds passed. The enchantment remained intact as Micky shattered his previous record. The gales didn’t just crash onto the rune, however. They also collided with one another, brewing a chaotic storm inside the organ.
The enchantment wasn’t spinning at a fixed speed, nor in a single direction. It constantly accelerated and decelerated, its rotation fluctuating wildly from one moment to the next. Every major shift threatened to throw Micky off, and to undo the symbol’s structure, each sudden change impossible to predict or prepare for.
Micky was hanging on for dear life, like a boat trying to stay afloat atop a tumultuous ocean. He filtered all the detrimental information out, concentrating on nothing but the rune itself as he poured his mind into keeping every last stroke of the magical symbol in place. Whenever the shape felt like it was about to twist, he clamped down on it just a touch harder, letting go again as soon as the storm eased.
A minute passed, and then another – he guessed so at least, though he was too preoccupied with the difficult task to keep track. Micky’s mind constantly alternated between tense and relaxed, almost as if he was wrestling with a tireless hurricane – struggling to block its violent blows with everything he had.
Thankfully, the situation improved markedly over time. It never got easy per se, but it did get a little easier after a while.
About an hour in, Micky wasn’t as worried about the enchantment falling apart anymore. Maintaining its shape still required a lot of effort, but he was feeling increasingly confident that he could keep it up for a very long time if he didn’t break focus, and his Status seemed to agree with that assessment.
[Congratulations! You have mastered a new spell: Spectral Art: Internal Runecrafting – Refined!]
Comments
Wolven
My bets on them using the technique for Moirais’ dual cores to set up some orbiting rings of enchantments that sustain themselves and keep phantom mana accessible without doing anything
Andrew P
I get the impression that the boost from a core is an ongoing passive effect. If he artificially improves his core, he'll get benefits such as slower aging only while the grade is artificially improve6
Leo
How does the artificial promotion work in theory? If Percy can jump one grade then can't he jump again and again?
Tomer Yud
I agree with every word
brennon Petersen
Tftc!
Tim
Depends from what the pipes are made of if they are made of mana they might suffer the same problems as the runes without scribing trait boost. But adjusting redirecting the flow is a good idea. Also mana might start moving even more once he uses the boosting art. But i assume every affinity might have different problems, wind wants to move the most apparently.
Kaladin
It's odd reading Mickey's name over and over again overlaying Percy's personality. I understand they are fused that the soul of who they were is no longer independent, but it's still hard to adjust the mindset after so many books. Percy is an ingenious prodigy who makes new discoveries constantly and not just due to his advantages but in fields that stagnated for years. Mickey we haven't seen that with either in crow or huehue form sitting for decades in a fighting pit with a partial circulation and then decades more as a crow struggling with spells without the clones support to develop it. Additionally, Metatron pioneered the entire runic language. I doubt he is able to mimic circulation mostly because he doesn't understand it yet, but just watching it used a few times should be more than enough for someone as talented as him. I don't see why Percy feels the need to require an antagonistic relationship with the Titan. I do honestly believe that they can have a mutually beneficial relationship for centuries as long as Percy is careful. He has plenty of value especially on the timeline of Gods and metatron probably gains just buy watching Percy with each of his new tools. Ideally metatron just waits and let's Percy's experiments keep arriving under his eyes and he has plenty to gain as the evil scientist he is.
ZaA
If the flow is a big problem he could probably make partitions and "pipes" that lead to better/smoother flow. If he needs it to spin to help aid cohesion then creating a either a disk that acts as a.. valve.. a funky disc valve with two stems on its face and tail that allow for it to spin around its center of mass by using the flow to his advantage as well as some partitions to assist in guiding the flow. Could possibly create an array shaped into a sphere and try to remove the flow disruption by creating a pressurized void using the same idea of partitions to guide flow around the void housing the sphere in its center. Surprised hes not enchanted his bones or tried enchanting a beasts cores surface.
