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[Poll] - Super N0x Focus

🕑 Added 2022-11-30 12:49:11 +0000 UTC

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Haseu

I'm not intent to stop, and i really want to work on many others!

Haseu

You make me very happy Frank!!! Thank you!

Haseu

Thank you dawn! I was not going to open to this but, i really fell that was necessary after this chapter with Jane.

Haseu

Thank you very much Roberto!

Haseu

I understand Benjamin, and thank you very much for the effort to give me a feedback, even in these conditions!

Haseu

Hi Mistress, thank you very much for the feedback! You mention " just a dropped character with no relevance again", when you say again are referring about? And about antagonist, i have write about this. But i don't want to spoil. Thank you again!

Benjamin Smith

It's honestly very difficult to give useful feedback without knowing where the story is heading. Which would be spoilers for any of us. ...I mean lets be honest, were all here...comsuming this type of excellent content for a reason... ...but if i was to give some story writing feedback. I'd say it's absolutely fine to follow some other characters. That said, anyone introduced should serve a purpose to the overall story. Frankly...if i get to see even more ladies go from scrawny to beefy, i'm happy! :)

MistressofTransformation

The side stuff is good if it leads somewhere and the girl selling clothes isn't just a dropped character with no relevance again. Still looking for an ambitious antagonist of some kind to show up so those muscles have more of a reason to grow. (not the army or police hopefully)

Halle

Hope to see some sweet stories .

frank gasteon

Megan is a sweetheart… but the mischievousness of the sister is incredibly appealing - do what you do!!! Terrific work!!!

dawnbreaker

I'm certainly torn on what to vote since i enjoy megan and john. However i do not know your original plan obviously nor do i wish to necessarily interfere with it. At least not in anyway which will make it worse.

Roberto Gambardella

This is your story and you and only you know what’s the best way to make it. T.


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