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Chapter 2 update log 5 + Announcement
🕑 Added 2017-08-14 21:49:03 +0000 UTC AnnouncementHi, Oni's here
I've have recently made up my mind on an important choice, and I think I should let you guys know about it. It's the decision that I would re-write the majority of Chapter 2 pages. The reason for this is that I've been going over my pages as I've been working on Chapter 2, and I was quite unhappy with my work.
I feel that Chapter 2 has quite a bit of problem to it, I feel that some segment were rushed and the feeling in some scene were not as impactful as I want them to be, I think this is mainly because I was drawing the pages without planning out the storyboard first, like I did for Chapter 1, so some panel feels too rough, like I didn't put effort into it.
I attempt to find a way to work faster, but it failed and backfire on me, and even though knowing that I keep on writing the chapter because I feel that I've already made you guys waited long enough already, but the more I press on the more unsatisfy I've become with my own work.
So as I said before, I've decided! I will re-write most pages of Chapter 2, It pains me to make my readers wait, but it pains me even more to give them a work that I, myself, do not think is fun!
Now to clarify a couple of things, there are some pages I'm satisfy with, so I'll keep those page, and there are some page where I wanted to fixed some panel only, so even though I said I would re-write the majority of pages in Chapter 2, It doesn't mean I need to write Chapter 2 All over again, So you can rest assured
And, as prove of my conviction, Here are some pages that I've fixed over the past few days: (From Right to left)
Old version
New Version
So in conclusion, again, I've tried to find a way to work faster, but it failed and cost me more time instead ;;v;;
I've already got a new Storyboard planned out though so it should be smooth sailing from here!
I'm really sorry again and again guys but I understand now, that the best way to do this is to give it my all to every pages and every panels.
As always, I'll keep you guys update on any interesting spoiler pages that come by in the future right here! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Comments
Onigensou
Thank you, I really appreciate this message Kyle, I can't deny that I feel somewhat pressured, because I understand that people is putting money in this, which I'm really thankful for, but in the end I just can't really put out works that I'm not happy with, sorry YwY
Onigensou
It's a big decision that's for sure, but I believe it is for the better. Sorry for the inconvenience, even though it's still just Chapter 2 ^ ^"
Man, i completely back up what Chirutai said, est way to do something, is to just do it and do it to the best of your ability! We have faith and are patient! Haha
Chirutai
Totally understand the delay! It's your first time undertaking such a massive project, so it's natural that there will be a few hiccups, you are learning by doing! I am impressed by your commitment to quality, redoing entire pages from scratch takes some courage for sure.
