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ACT2CH32 - Lex Talionis

🕑 Added 2023-06-12 15:44:33 +0000 UTC

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The BlackStaff and NightMarE

Edited. Thanks for noticing.

Brian Comston

“Indulge me,” said Daphne, in a tone of cold steel that told everyone in the room it was not an order but a request. I think you have the order of words reversed. Personally it makes more sense to say it was not a request but an order. Jugson, Do you think the Dark Lord will let us do whatever we want? Does everyone else also think the same?” Missing the beginning quotation. Draco was sending her, and felt mightily pleased. had destroyed any and all political support he could have gained. Missing the word She after the period.

Brian Comston

A few errors I noticed and thought you might want to know about before it gets posted to fanfiction.net:


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