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Chapter 254 - Mita Eshel

🕑 Added 2022-07-29 13:12:18 +0000 UTC

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Jake122

this was a good conclusion.

greg

Got to admit, this is a good conclusion chapter or church arc... well there is still the main task to go and closure arc to run out or finish..

Jake

Well that's ominous for the Church lmao

Avery Light

Thx for the detailed praise XD

Karp

Sry for the block wall, wrote this on my phone.

Karp

Okay, this was a good conclusion to this Act. Probably your best chapter in a while imo. Great dialogue today. I got some palpatine vibes of "strike me down and you shall become more powerful than you could possibly imagine." And I'm glad it was just vibes and not something you had to directly tell me about. You're doing good taking that co destructive criticism, bravo. Seeing that church chick upgrade was cool, and Viers acknowledging the church was cool to. Most people only see the negatives of religion, never realizing that even irl, law, science and modern morals would have no basis without our history of religion. And ofc like the Chad Viers is, he also isnt sucking off the entire church. Really like how this team up worked out. That Rose inner monologue was both great in character and hilarious, thiking about how to gently let Viers down, lol!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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