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Your Father (English) (Español)
🕑 Added 2019-11-26 14:22:20 +0000 UTCRead from left to right
My English is not good, so if you see any error in any text please tell me so I can fix it, thanks.
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Comments
walakki
Well on page 2 when the father sees Noa he said "You said it was just a little effeminate" it should say "he" rather than "it" because we presume this is a boy. Also on page 6 the father's response "She told you that? But if you look like a woman" the only part to fix is remove "if" from the sentence it will read better. Other than this all the pages look good on English
