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[TnL] Chapter 166.5 – Interlude: The Söldnerklan Feuerschwarz II

🕑 Added 2025-11-08 10:22:40 +0000 UTC

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Eleeyah

You got it, thank you <3

Dalth

Hengst has some massive ego and narcissism problems, and it’s great to see him get a backhanded slap when Tinea’s choice wasn’t even about him. It feels balanced in him, especially “Hengst knew he himself would already have been chosen, if he didn't have the Klan to project his skill and power.” His self centered thoughts make him see himself as an obvious choice, but at the same time, narcissism says “why wouldn’t anyone choose someone as good as me?” You’ve done a fantastic job of him always making him slightly shift the perspective so it’s someone ELSE who is a problem. Hengst does it to his second in the first paragraph, his wife running away and claims she betrayed him, Tinea choosing to adopt being female over male that’s clearly Tinea picking her mother, a bunch else. It’s a good show of egoism because he can’t possibly consider that there might be a reason that simply does not involve him.

Eleeyah

Does he feel coherent in his narcissisms though? I'm trying to portray him as a deep-in-the-bog narcissist who's learned to control his egotistical impulses through competing interests, yet is not consciously aware of it at all. He still entirely lacks insight into his inner world.

SmokeJam

Thoroughly creepy, holy shit 😅


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