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Chapter 68

🕑 Added 2024-09-23 18:27:59 +0000 UTC

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Jar Jar Bingus

Kael looking like the Emprah at the end

xRoymustang

it's a multi character fight with many Pov's it's always going to drag one piece style regardless of the authors intent.

Feliprins

I feel that Roommath going for the nuclear option was too sudden and out of context, just because he knows necromancy, does not mean he will upend the whole government... Why would he even go to those lengths? There's too much missing context and feels a bit forced, like there was a need for a villain and betrayal for character progression, so might as well chose Roommath. I would like a forewarning to prepare my expectations, to know someone is up to no good things before it springs up like that, Halduron just saying he knew Rommath knew necromancy was really not enough to change my view of him from the WoW lore.

santhinal

ya the biggist issue I have notice in this fic is that Karp has a tendancy to drag out plotlines for just a BIT too long. Its not too bad and certainly FAR better than too little information/filler but not quite as good as it could be.

Grey Heart

Kinda feel like this fight is dragging on now. Hope it ends soon and we move on to taking back the Kingdom?


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