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Dustbender 001 (ATLA)

🕑 Added 2025-04-27 01:10:01 +0000 UTC

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Derisat

Oh I like this. Good start

Karp

I'm working on ch 2 rn. Funny enough, I made a reworked version (that I'm not posting) earlier today in which it's literally nothing but "action." Glad you like it.

Ethan

I like the laid back opening. I feel like a lot of these types stories rush the characters into the conflict because the author can’t make the lead up story engaging. You nailed it here. There’s progress and the plots moving but I don’t feel like he’s recklessly charging at every threat possible just for “action”.

AlthePal

This one looks like a really fun one too!! Damn mate, you keep coming up with some real nice blends

Karp

idk, this one doesn't seem so popular. I should've gone with a cold open, and had the MC overcome a siege or something with some dust bending into the fire benders eyes. I appreciate you though.

David Zimmerle

Why do you constantly produce such banger stories? Is it witchcraft?


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