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Brewster's Brood - Part Eight

🕑 Added 2022-01-29 10:10:20 +0000 UTC

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Corrupting Power

Part of the fun of this story is that everything is always going to be in a constant state of flux. Max has clearly had doubts before, and they'll circle around again and again, with different results from time to time. Hilariously enough, as the writer, I know I lean towards a couple of characters, but I also know that I haven't even dreamt up over half the participants so the game's got a long, long way to go. The best part? I do know that people are going to develop favorites and then watch them change and evolve as the story does.

SP Rupert

Great chapter. I'm glad you were able to bring forth some of your audience concerns so soon in the story. One of the things I mentally knew I was going to have to prepare myself for when the story started was rooting for a specific woman or specific women to end up with Max in the end. And even though it's waaaaaaaaaay too early in the story to go there I already have. I'm going to have to pull up and just enjoy the story instead. We'll see how my lady/ladies end up in the end. So good on you for laying out the characters in a manner that made me start to root for one/some. PS - I'm deliberately being vague because I don't want to show you my hand on preferences too early.

Kaywye

Okay. So you want to know what I like most about this chapter? The fact that Max isn't just accepting this. The fact that his brain is sending him a whole lot of (justified) red flags, even if he can't exactly put a finger on why yet. Odds are 50/50 that he will either stop listening to those warnings or that they will continue to grow. I'm here to figure out which it will be. Good work!


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