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Quaranteam - Chapter 43

🕑 Added 2022-05-07 00:30:23 +0000 UTC

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SP Rupert

Just the thought of a foursome with Asha, Taylor and Hannah would keep me happy for a very long time but I would always worry about the rest of the ladies. What’s amazing is that in this story the rest of the Rookies not only accepted it but ENCOURAGED it. It’s like one big team pulling for the next epic tale of “What Happened In Bed With Andy Yesterday.” I mean I’m picturing an after show with someone like Reality Steve and a predictions podcast with Chris Hardwick and an afternoon tell all interview show with Ellen or Drew Barrymore. And that’s just WITHIN the House Of Rook. Andy is a very lucky man. With Gregor I’m not sure to root for him or not. We hardly know him. But if he thought to call Andy Gregor must think Andy can help so we’ll see how this one goes. It’s going to be a long 3 weeks until we find out what happens next!

Cynthia Parker

loving this story but did you really have to leave it on that huge cliffhanger I'm going to be anxiously awaiting an update

Anon Donner

I enjoyed the teen trio's plan, but am really waiting for the 60-minute episode and presidential speech. Somehow I think we might have to wait until you finish the next few chapters of Piper's Prelude. Meanwhile donuts to dollars (reversal of the common saying is intentional, since donuts usually cost more than a dollar now :) that this episode's cliff hanger is related.

Corrupting Power

All should be fixed now. The italics spacing is a weird artifact from cut'n'pasting from OpenOffice to the Patreon editor. I usually catch them, but was pressed for time.

Kaywye

Yeah. I have a love/gate relationship with cliffhangers. I love the tension they vying to a read, and want that tension resolved as quickly as possible. I get it though. Good job this chapter. Also I wanted to say good job on thinking through the younger girls potential issues with being the youngest in the group. It's that kind of emotional 'consideration' that will keep this group together and happy for the long run.

Crap.. flip I don't want to wait for the next chapter.

Anon Donner

Minor typos. Some missing spaces after italics. 'Here' instead of 'hear' (“Here that, Daddy?” Hannah giggled).

FZ Moto

Always a cliff hanger. Can't wait to read how it resolves. Keep up writing these excellent stories!

Paul Bell

Here I was thinking hanger space envy might be one of the triggering feuds that started endangering people, and then you go and leave us with that cliff hanger. As always truely enjoy your writing and eagerly anticipating the next chapter.


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