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A Pack Of His Own - Part 1

🕑 Added 2022-12-02 19:00:00 +0000 UTC

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Corrupting Power

The story's written from Will's perspective, a twenty-something college student with no military experience. It was written as such to reinforce that lack of experience. Using it correctly would've defeated the point?

RadAsha Nightstrider

Please learn military unit structure before you use it in writing. A battalion is part of a regiment. A Company 1st battalion 1st regiment or A Co. 1/1 Stripper Bn.

Matt

I think I'm going to love this one.

Kodenkan

Great portentous start.

pohmii Holloman

I like ti but please don't turn him into a vampire

Good hot start

SovietDegendays

Good start looking forward to pt 2

Love it so far

Rick Shaw

Great start, don’t wait too long for Chapt 2

Invernos

Interesting, good start.

Anthony Samora

Absolutely perfect


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