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Quaranteam 2:5

🕑 Added 2023-02-25 22:07:56 +0000 UTC

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Edward Becerra

Thanks. I served through the Cold War, it left me more paranoid than I'm happy with. I hoped to see the end of the series. My own doctor has been giving me increasingly unhappy news lately. Have fun writing, I'll have fun being a patron.

Corrupting Power

I will say that "encoding" and "imprinting" are different words. ;) Don't worry, this'll become more clear as we move forward.

Edward Becerra

"Encoding"? Interesting. She's supposed to be a Korean-American and she's saying the Russian version of "Imprinting"?

Admiral Ale

3w and we are still waiting?

Todd Garrison

What hiccup did put in with the word koanpobka.

Metadi

In this chapter Andy is complaining about being rushed into a last min decision after he went through with it. Wouldn’t it have been more in character to stop and insist on more information? Or at least a check in with everyone? You’ve established that leaving a woman for days post dosing is cruel but 2 hours to talk it through? I’m surprised we didn’t see Phil or another Dr as part of the conversation.

Nick J

I always tell myself to wait to read these so I don't have to wait for the next one. It never works out... 😂

Hugh Peeble

I have been on this ride with you for a while and I appreciate your limited use of the device overall in your writing so carry on and ignore my grouchiness.

Corrupting Power

Awww, let a boy have his fun. ;)

Hugh Peeble

Cliffhanger endings.. curse you for this! They are less impactful as a chapter to chapter occurrence in a fully finished book… serialized like this it is painful… like pre internet streaming TV season painful.

Corrupting Power

Lexi and Niko just switched who was driving back and who was staying on. I'll go back and add in that little detail with a minor revision. As for the author's legacy, publishing from another author's estate takes time, but it is something I haven't forgotten about and will be bringing up later! You'll probably see Andy griping about how long contracts take before anything else actually happens with it. ;)

Corrupting Power

I will just say this - Niko, as someone who works on the base, has seen *way* more imprintings than anyone else in the family. The answer to your question has been hinted at various times over the QT stories, so if you don't figure it out before then, it'll make total sense when you see it. ;)

Todd Garrison

Very good chapter, but I have two questions why not any follow up on Chapter 46 of Book 1(the 3 gifts of Devin McTaggert) and why did Niko come back to the base and not Lexi as was mentioned in chapter 2:4. I'm glad to the date on each chapter and Thank you for your response to that question.

Kaywye

Okay...did I miss something? Cause I had no clue that Andy was just gonna pass out afterwards, and Niko is talking like it was not only expected, but that it was odd that it hadn't happened already. So I'm left wondering if there was a detail explained that didn't stick in my brain. Otherwise, great chapter...I love the mental head space that Melody is in...understandable after her ordeal, and yet the fact that she isn't worse off points to either her strength of character coupled with her CIA training, or the fact that she is repressing big time and will go off unexpectedly later.


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