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Quaranteam 2:5.5 (Intermission One)

🕑 Added 2023-03-11 04:48:07 +0000 UTC

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Admiral Ale

I'm waiting to see how this added burden adds time away from QT2 and ALL the other story lines CP has. I am hoping to see alot more before my Inspection sticker on my SUV expires in 2026. Stay safe.

Ronan

Nice to see an alternate perspective.

Kaywye

I agree with J.D. It was an interesting glimpse into another person's reality on the world of DuoHalo. You can leave it at that, or if you decide to, you can start a story of a totally different perspective. Gives you options.

J.D.

It held my interest almost from the start. I thought you were going a different direction but as usual you created something new that has a lot of promise if you decide to run with it. Thanks again for something entertaining that gives me something to maybe look forward to.

Cynthia Parker

I liked it, it was a good beginning to new story with a new group of people. it could be a great addition to the quaranteam world along with Phil's tail.

Corrupting Power

Mostly intermissions are less about the characters featured and more about the details of the world around them, like the state of downtown Minneapolis, or how people are getting moved around in phases. We'll be back with Andy soon enough.

Corrupting Power

The intermissions are meant to give a perspective to a portion of the QT world that we haven't really touched on yet. For this one in particular, I wanted to show that not everybody's getting mansions, that the downtown areas feel like ghost towns and that different states are moving at different rates. Each one is likely to be self-contained, a little slice of life from someone else in the QT universe.

Mark

The main story is closing in on 400,000 words, plus the closely related Phil/Piper/McCallister mini-series' that I'd guess are somewhere in the neighborhood of 100,000 more words, while this one is a bit short of 5,000. I would suggest you're holding this intermission to an unreasonable standard.

Todd Garrison

It’s a good story and diversion, but Andy Rook’s story has more layers and depth to it. You could link some teams to Team Rook friends, family or work associates. Breakthebar did something similar win used your characters(Charlotte Varma and Bill Mackenzie) in latest chapter.

Psychopuppy

Interesting intermission but I hope you are not going to give up on The Rookies.I have reread the story about 2 dozen times and I am ordering my book today (autographed). Keep up the great work!


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