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Quaranteam: Phil's Tale - Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2022-10-03 03:32:45 +0000 UTC

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Stephen

PS I love the idea of "the angriest memo". "Don't make Memo mad. You won't like Memo when it's mad. "

Stephen

Small edit: "but because there were so fewer people around to catch it." Either "so few" or "fewer". Comparative adjectives don't need adverbs

Shan Wilson

Thank you very much for all the work you're doing on timelines! I love the story, and it's only ever been timelines that throw me off. Thanks for another great chapter.


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