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C.A.R.P. - Part 4

🕑 Added 2023-03-30 10:32:43 +0000 UTC

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Ronan

Excellent series. I like the first person POV. I like that it's a poly story without an apocalypse.

JC

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JC

“I think the teachers were more comfortable with me once Julia started coming as well, because it was clear the two of us were a couple, and it made me look less the deranged loner type” -- fun fact - a lot of shooting ranges will not rent a gun to a person coming in alone. I looked into why and apparently there was a string of suicides at gun ranges with people coming alone.

J.D.

I will usually give a story maybe two chapters before I bail on something that just doesn’t match with my interests and by then it has also shown if it is dragging along. I have learned to give the excellent authors who I have read their other stuff and know they usually have a plan so I gave this until this chapter which was totally the right choice. You threw enough hints that the future will be interesting along with this chapter moving things at a pace where there was action and some truths came out which hooked me. I can’t wait to get deeper into this and see how it all comes together and finally plays out.

Smcrae5639

This story line has the potential have me like it as much or more thanks quarenteam

patient1

My first thought was "It's arrow in my quiver" because it's another weapon in his arsenal or tool in his box. But since this is a sexy story there are double entendres to be had, so if it's a mistake it's one I'm glad Dev made. Maybe it's a Freudian slip on her part. Makes me wonder if the doc has the hots for him.

SovietDegendays

That was a good chapter!

SC

I’m liking where this is going. Also, words swapped…. “that quiver in my arrow”


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